Open Poetry #12 |
Age and Sage |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Age and Sage I have studied most of the sage From age to age-to-age. Listened and read from rage to rage From page to page-to-page. Knitted their Dane from skein to skein From wane too sane to wane Sorted their kind from find to blind From mind to mind-to-mind. Emulated each road they strode From mode to load to mode Adopted each and every code From bode to ode to ode. But never could I find a door To stop the gnaw of gnaw To sate my mind and stop the thaw Of having more and more It’s good there is an end to end To end the rend of wend to wend. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
you knew, too, you knew in blue I would find a liking in this from you too true, 'tis you, 'tis true... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
absolutely smile-breaking... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great write Seymour I enjoyed very much ethome The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
your poets pen ... your wisdom tool with each write ... you reach new heights of cool with each verse ... you take us back to school you teach us well ... poetic golden rule baptised in the wealth ... of your knowledge pool all who see are awed ... I above all ... your poetic fool *winkiewinkie* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Cute reply, thank you. *L* Nakd, Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. Ethome, Glad you enjoyed. JM, Your no fool, but if you want to be my sweet lovable personal fool I'd be happy to play the fool with you. WW R S |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Mike belikes terse verse? 'tis likely. bitten, nay smitten, by ode well written. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mike, Well written and thanks. |
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