Open Poetry #12 |
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Addiction |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada ![]() |
PLease forgive my absence here all..... I have been struck with a condition called Gout which has inflamed my right wrist and is a very painful ordeal. While I was down with this condition and on medication an old girlfriend of mine paid me a visit to talk about her son's drug problem. Well, after listening to her I began to realize what she was up against. I tried to comfort her and told her that I had written a poem about cocaine and that I would email it to her and she could show it to her son. I knew it wouldn't change him but every little bit helps.....this was written three years ago for an old friend that was losing him self on this demonic substance.....here goes!.......ethome Here and there bold merchants bear their goods to pigeon beaks. The smuggled secrets hidden there bring sugar ships their grease. Clouds of dark that cloak the heart and shadow lip loss out of form turn to cotton candy art when Captain Snow sails the horn. The opening night, whispered hype, center stage awaits, it's time, the curtain drawn, the subtle lights the armored heart to fly. Flush cheeks and answered color, stepping out before the crowd, the burst of fashion flutter the hands to make one proud. The tragic conversation the rows of spiral stairways. A poet's sphere sagacious here the journey back as always. Backstage the mood dispenses, the soul returns to hide. And in the gloom defenseless small voices cry for lines. Under the skies wide oceans high in the morning small voices cry for lines. He played in a popular rock band! ethome [This message has been edited by ethome (edited 01-13-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Amazing that artists [of any nature] surpass their own gifts and fame most often brings their ruin and always, always it seems that drugs are involved... I hope your friend's son listens...but either way, you offered your hand and your heart and sometimes, my friend, that is all we can do... for responsibility lies with each of us... {{hugs}} |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The tragic conversation the rows of spiral stairways. A poet's sphere sagacious here the journey back as always. Backstage the mood dispenses, the soul returns to hide. And in the gloom defenseless small voices cry for lines. Under the skies wide oceans high in the morning small voices cry for lines. ===================== your wings are showing E-babes ... very cool write ... feel better my freind we've missed you here jm No one ever told me ... I could get lost while standing still ... and sorrow doesnt make a sound ... as it takes away all your will. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
First of all....I'm sooooo sorry, hope you get feeling better soon! Second....pain has in no way hindered your muse....once again ethome....wow...I'm glad that we decided to come back at the same time so I didn't miss this one~ You can swim in the waves of the weave...without sinking into the mind of the weaver~ |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
P T love, oh that is sooooooo painful, I hope the treatment sorts it out. And the sooner the better love, not just for you although that too, for us, we miss our P T. I miss my P T. This is as are all of yours truly wonderful, you explain in a way that others can comprehend the tragedy of this, be it an addiction to cocain or any other substance. Utterly wonderful piece from you, and you never fail me to give me the picture I need. Thank you love and as always I really and truly mean it, utterly! Take care love Mushy ![]() Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 01-13-2001).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
ethome, Powerful poem filled with haunting images. I hope it helps him some. Hope you are feeling better too. ![]() LW< !signature--> Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 01-13-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey sweetness...you knew I'd show up if ya called a meeting...will e mail you some things...If I can be nothing but a warning? will do....HUGS |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ETHOME..drugs have a way of destroying good people, no? .... ![]() this one caught my attention first of all, because i have one by the same title.. ![]() ![]() hope you get to feeling better real soon e ![]() hugs, g "oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Good poem. The tragedy of addiction is overwhelming. If the end result was seen before the hand of darkness closes in, I wonder how many would search for a way of escape... I have lost someone dear to my heart, because of drugs, so I can relate. Sending prayers for your friend. Hugs to you for careing. Deb |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I too hope you are feeling better! And want to commend you on this poem. Addiction is tragic - when someone seeks an unnatural escape from life, it usually ends in tragedy. Let's hope your friend's son finds his way out before that happens. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
ethome--there are so many types of addiction...each robes us of time and hurts the true human quality of life...I hope that this poem helped..it is, of course..so well done. I've missed you! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Karilea. You're right, I don't know what drives them down that road but it all too often can be tragic. Hey! My poet pet! Thanks for the giving me some wings. Maybe I'll have to fly down there and listen to and discuss your Van collection! LOve your comments. Butterflies...thank you so much. I am feeling better now. I really appreciate the comments! Thank you my sweet English nurse friend for all the nice written thoughts...it's good to be back to read and write! Thank you Lone Wolf for the kind words and the wishes. Celeste I'm always so glad to hear from my favourite Acadian princess...I'll be looking for your emails.....ethome Dgvarner thank you so much for the comments and for taking the time to read this! Thanks Blooming Rose! I'm so sorry to hear that you lost someone close to you through this terrible addiction...It's a terrible affliction that is gripping the entire nation. Take care...ethome Poet deVine thanks for taking the time to read this work and for your insightful comments! Matrie I hope the poem might help too. Once we give up trying to help then we have nothing. So, we keep on trying, thanks again! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh ethome my heart goes out to your friend, drugs are such a problem and the thing is that once they are hooked it's a long road back to where they came from....please let her know that I will be keeping her and her son in my prayers as I know first hand what drugs can do to a young person. ~HUG~ ~HUGS~ ~HUGS~ floating your way my friend Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Addiction's do a very nice job of destroying life's...I have personally witnessed two woman I know fight and beat cocaine addiction's...it was done with the help of friends standing by them for a long period of time...I could see death staring them in the face if they had not changed their path...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Tracie for the hugs and the kind thoughts and the prayers.....ethome Thank you James for the encouraging thoughts and the nice story about the women that recovered .......there's always hope...ethome |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
i feel that pain of addiction as well. we all have one, some are just worse than others. mine is to alcohol and caffeine pills. great job on this piece, dancing imagery with many undertones. clever and tragic... good luck. with everything. Everyone's got their demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A most beautiful and haunting read Ethome .. the imagery was wonderful in this poignant piece, really well written ... you've been missed! (PS ... I'm glad to read that you're feeling better now.) ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Ethan. I can relate to the alcohol addiction that's for sure and I appreciate your comments and your honesty...thanks again...ethome Thank you Kit for the kind words and thoughts . I'm always so happy to hear from you....ethome |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
drugs can destroy so many lifes...have seen it around me too, not only the addicted person but also the one who cares and loves him. very well written my friend, my prayers are with you and your friend. (((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
THis poem cuts to the core. What a trgedy that so many young artists fall into dugs. They have so much to give. I have had addiction in my family and know that it hurts everyone. I wish your friend well. Liz |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you so much Charisma for the comments I appreciate your insight. Thanks Elizabeth for the concerned words and relating the information....ethome |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
So sorry to hear about the gout......my grandma had it in her leg, very painful....I hope you are better soon........ Amazing poem......I hope things work out for your friend's son. ![]() |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Excellent poem! I hope you feel better soon... and hope your friend's son heeds your words. *S* |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Take care of yourself. Enjoyed the read. Healing is the important thing, you can always write! Kathleen |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks so much Sea I really appreciate the comments and the knowledge of the condition. Thank you suthern for dropping in for the read. Kathleen thanks for the comments and I am going to start writing more real soon! |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i guess you are feeling better now? ![]() i liked the way you chose your words here, allowing the reader to form his mental images.... hope your friend's son is doing well |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Kaile for the thoughts...I know it's a scary struggle for her as the drug scene has no trust element to soothe her soul over him.......thanks again.......ethome The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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