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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-02-15 09:38 PM

Engaging, blinking
by silver stars all winking
on the two in love

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

OLIAS
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since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

1 posted 2001-02-15 09:48 PM

Wonderful Haiku
stunningly executed,
Not a word wasted.

Sorry I couln't resist it, but I meant every word,
Regards,
Olias.

insect
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since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

2 posted 2001-02-15 10:08 PM

This is heavenly beautiful!
Very nice write of lovers in the night

[This message has been edited by insect (edited 02-15-2001).]

Robert Joseph
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since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

3 posted 2001-02-15 10:39 PM

Naturally romantic, amazing how much can be seen in the light of a few words. Lovely work, Karilea.

Robert Joseph

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

4 posted 2001-02-16 01:10 PM

You knew i would love this one...excellent.

Poeminister

ATelamon
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since 2001-02-06

Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up

5 posted 2001-02-16 02:37 PM

Very very nice. Most pleasing to eye and ear.

Well done

Compliments
AT

"Time is merely change. It neither enslaves nor determines us. It is instead our opportunity for self-definition"

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

6 posted 2001-02-16 07:45 PM

so well done - I felt they blinked at me

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2001-02-16 07:47 PM

Music to my eyes and ears ... this was so smooth and delightful Karilea, just lovely!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

8 posted 2001-02-16 08:03 PM

yep, smooth as silk...those stars shine down on us all....good writing, Sunshine

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

9 posted 2001-02-16 08:42 PM

I love this, have never written in this form, maybe someday I will.

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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