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Open Poetry #12

A vision of beauty

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-02-15 02:01 PM

A vision of beauty, that's
you. Non, but perfect silky
curls. At your feet, sins awaits.
Men lie profoundly at you mercy.
Your eyes show no mercy, as you
stare at their blank faces. Your
lips, have compassion, searching
for their inner senses. Ice cold
hands that touch their souls. Only
bitterness replaces that feeling of
being faithless. Ripped apart on your
bed lie human specs, which you've
shredded.

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

1 posted 2001-02-15 02:06 PM

awwwww.... THANK YOU! you're so sweet to say so... *wink*

hehe... this is lovely, truly!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2001-02-15 07:51 PM

Your eyes show no mercy, as you
stare at their blank faces

that's me today...no mercy in these eyes..*s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

3 posted 2001-02-15 09:28 PM

burst out laughing at Doreen!!!!!

I loved this! Wicked! You've captured this completely. Wonderful work here.

To capture and live a moment is truly living

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

4 posted 2001-02-16 01:13 PM

Thanks, guys I enjoy the encouragement.

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