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Natural Thoughts |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Natural Thoughts people reflecting nature and it’s cycles ~ nature skipping in a person’s walk… as it is, as it is… a despondent period is nothing more than the sun hiding for a little while behind a cloud just a little while…. preparing rainbows for behind every cloud lies a silver lining ‘tis true….a promise…. as it is, as it is…. not-so-great days are nothing more than the earth receiving some rain to replenish the sources of life-giving waters drink deep and know that neither you or the skies cry in vain for in giving of ourselves even in tears we are able to receive as it is, as it is…. wonderful days are a culmination of all that is right in both worlds a person’s world in nature’s world enjoy, and sing and rejoice a little more… as it is, as it is…. then when the sun comes again the rainbows will appear in the aftermist of rain all forces working together then when your smile comes again making twinkling eyes appear in the aftermath of tears all forces working together if you believe… and if you don’t believe, why not? You may…. for it is as it is, as it is…. 02.15.01 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Let me be the first to say, excellent. Sometimes you almost fly out of sight. *L* |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
beautiful poem, "then when your smile comes again making twinkling eyes appear in the aftermath of tears" very good! AP |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"for behind every cloud lies a silver lining" "all forces working together" And naturally beautiful. Wonderful write.  ...Poeminister |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
it is? REALLY? you PROMISE? .... you mean everthing's going to be ok?... *sigh*.... i hope so.... thank you for such a positive look on life... it is obvious why you are our Sunshine!  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Thank you for sharing this compassionate piece, it really blessed me today. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
‘tis true….a promise…. as it is, as it is…. not-so-great days are nothing more than the earth receiving some rain to replenish the sources of life-giving waters drink deep and know that neither you or the skies cry in vain for in giving of ourselves even in tears we are able to receive as it is, as it is…. ===================== "as it is, as it is…." indeed wise poetess of the sun ... indeed. very cool write K ... and put me down for an echo of Sy.  When you see thru loves illusion, theres the danger your perfect lover looks like a perfect fool you go running off in search of a perfect stranger |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Once again this is a very creative write and so typical of the Sunshine I have come to know and love...as Janet would say...cool very very cool!... and you are lady of the sun! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
In a mixing of the responses received, I want to thank everyone for the excellently cool comments! Thank you all! |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Very prophetic and optimistic way of looking at life and nature, this has almost an eastern quality about it, I enjoyed it very much, Thanks for sharing. Regards, Olias. |
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