Open Poetry #12 |
Twelve Red Roses |
KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
HAPPY VALENTINES DAY! One brush of your lips on mine Two hands with a touch divine Three long kisses that taste so sweet Four times my heart skipped a beat Five caresses over lush curves Six soft whispers of sweet love words Seven times I called your name Eight more kisses and none too tame Nine love songs sung in my ear Ten Valentines sent to say you care Eleven smiles between us two Twelve red roses from me to you Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Great sequential piece! Nathan |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Koko...hope you have a nice Valentines day..James |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Hey, how did you know I got 12 roses yesterday from my husband? I loved this one! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KoKo~ Just a lovely presentation of thoughts and format ... Greatly enjoyed this. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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