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Open Poetry #12

Time Line (Acrostic 16)

ATelamon
Member

since 2001-02-06

Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up

0 posted 2001-02-14 03:57 PM

Touch the inside moment revel in
Irony out of the blue unexpected
My mirror wonders what is inside
Escaping spilling all around me

Lingering here I breathe an
Impossibilty or is it dream unawakened
Next to all that propels one in days
Evermore calls me wondering if I know its song

"Time is merely change. It neither enslaves nor determines us. It is instead our opportunity for self-definition"

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2001-02-14 04:03 PM

Fascinating and the quote is as well!!

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2001-02-14 05:59 PM

Very very well done!

ATelamon
Member

since 2001-02-06

Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up

3 posted 2001-02-14 07:09 PM

I thank you both. Glad you found this enjoyable.

As for the quote, well, that falls under the category "Don't you just hate it when Kendell goes around quoting himself" LOLOL

Thanks again.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

4 posted 2001-02-14 09:12 PM

We all have an attraction for mirrows but who do we really see there, when we look at a reflection of ourselves in the mirrow?
I looked this little poem up, I wrote it a long time ago and I still feel the same.

I look at myself in the mirrow
and what do I see? What will my
eyes tell me? I'm I real? Can I
see my spirit if I see real close?
Do I shed a tear or do I jump with joy?
And if I see my spirit will it please me?

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