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Upon My Journey (To Elisa on Valentine's Day)
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Upon My Journey (To Elisa on Valentine's Day) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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I'm so attracted That I'm distracted The air is freshened And full of our love I can't go on now There're things to do now But there is one that I'm dreaming of Your name is beauty But are you real then If I could touch you Would then I know? Upon my journey I learned of loving And when I found you I began to grow A bud, a tulip I kissed your two lips You drew the wind From out of my sails My journey ended I'm undefended I found the depths Of our stormy gales The air is freshened A smell of rebirth It's kind of like When I found you The storm, it settles A castaway Forgets his home And lives anew He never tries To leave the isle He's found his home And found his heart Volcanoes of Our passions spewed Nay this nor any Storm us apart [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 02-14-2001).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Walt what vivid and clear images! write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Walt, it's sentimental, it's sweet, it's rhythmic. It's perfect. (o: Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Walt this is passionate and loving. Very very good my friend!! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanks you three appreciaTE ITyuh |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ Well ... maybe today should be Valentine's Day all over again ! Lovely sentiments, sweet poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
AWHHHHHHHH SWEET ONE HERE! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
aw....waltie...you are so sweet....warmed my heart! ain't love lovely? |
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