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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2001-02-14 02:28 PM

FAX ME
By: Noah Eaton
2/14/01

Fax me
Your message of affection
You’re so lovely
Send me your feelings of endearment

Fax me
My heart is always on-line
Longing for your love so heavenly sweet
Smiling in your grace, waiting to be mine

Fax me
You are so beautifully precious
Melt my heart in your soft tender kiss, sweetie
Show me your world, as my lips touch yours, passionately luscious

Fax me
All that my heart desires
I want to love you, darling
Hold me as we swim in loves romantic fire

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2001-02-14 02:47 PM

This one even tasted sweet in the reading of it. Very touching words from you today. Much enjoyed the read.

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

2 posted 2001-02-14 04:37 PM

yes...*sigh* this was a bit tasty....

glad you took on the 'challenge'

, g

"maybe one day
we can turn and face our fears
maybe one day
we can reach out through our tears..."
-a grant

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

3 posted 2001-02-14 05:22 PM

"My heart is always on line" I really got a kick out of that line! Have to give that one line to my husband

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2001-02-14 05:23 PM

very nice...*s the title made me think of one I wrote 2 years ago called:

Fed-Ex Me Please

FedEx me please!!!
He wants me there,
domestically, through clouds in air.

Could handle that,
he says of me.
FedEx me please, and we shall see.

Just label me
and box me right
and send me special, overnight.

FedEx me please!!!
A current flight.
Be careful now, don't squeeze too tight.

Now land me, please.
Take special care,
be tender, handling all that's there.

Deliver me
upon his desk
and let him open, end this quest.

Will he delight?
Will he concede?
Am I the one, that meets his need?

~~~~
~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 02-14-2001).]

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2001-02-14 05:26 PM

Noah it seems to me that you are the king of adjectives....well done my friend!!

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