Open Poetry #12 |
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Ode to a Flower Shop |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California ![]() |
(Reposted to wish everyone a Happy Valentine's Day...and don't forget to say "I love you") Ode to a Flower Shop There are baskets and baskets and vases galore there are stuffed teddy bears sitting plump on the floor There are tulips in colors that you haven’t fathomed and ones that are feathered like birds, just imagine There are daffodil faces so perfectly cast that they warm up the room like the sun on the grass There is purple hydrangea full and robust and dainty pink roses for sweetness a must A flower shop blooming so full of perfume that it wears ode to springtime to freshen the room Do you like blue of iris with nostalgic heather we have it here no matter the weather A flower shop’s magic is in smiles that it brings to be part of the music makes everyone sing. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and so does a flower-girlie poet ![]() I do so love when ya rhyme sweet poet ... I was just saying to cowboy lastnight on phone how crazy it must be for you right now. "Say I love you with flowers" ![]() and poetry OF COURSE ... Happy Valentines Day Martie-girl ![]() In the evening when you see my eyes Looking back at you no disguise Im not sure who you think youll see Im just hoping youll still know that its me |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
This is soo beautiful - I think many men should (as I have) recieve flowers - at least once - to realize how they can make another feel romantically |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I hope you take time to smell some of these flowers today - it's your busiest day of the year right? I'm bookmarking this beauty! ![]() |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is lovely! *S* You made me want to come visit you... but don't worry about where I'd sleep... I'd just lean against the counter in your shop and inhale. *G* Beautiful! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
This is so light and lilting and full of melody! I think it's one of my favorites of yours. Thanks for reposting, I don't recall seeing it before and I'm sure I would! |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
The perfume of the flower shop is indeed sweet. Well said. AT "Time is merely change. It neither enslaves nor determines us. It is instead our opportunity for self-definition" |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Do you like blue of iris with nostalgic heather Martie, those words alone are a charm! I love the color! Robert Joseph |
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