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You are to me
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You are to me |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Instinctual, habitual you are to me. No other can enter, my key, only you keep. No need to guard it, for only one exist. Wild, tender we love like this. Don't bring another, they won't fit in. Two hearts, twin souls. Three would be sin. Enchanted, unspoiled my love it stays. Running free through my veins. Sometimes doubting that you feel the same. A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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Ladycat 
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
Wow. What else can I say? That is deep. Intense. I really enjoyed this piece. Love, Lady Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Yes, I agree...definitely an intense piece, wonderfully written! sp  everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
There wasn't a single word of this that I didn't love, relate to or appreciate greatly. Very nice work...and yet again, different from all the others. Thanks for your note, also. |
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