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my elusive dreamer of dreams
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my elusive dreamer of dreams |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon 
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I think I finally found him the writer of this fairy tale come true he's not famous or rich, just a simple man with a gentle soul and a compassionate heart his eyes could tell you of a thousand lonely nights his hands are covered with the marks of hard work yet when they touch me so tenderly I could swear they were as smooth as silk his laugh, sometimes silly, sometimes deep is as infectuous as a summer cold and I love the way he takes the time to look deep in my eyes, to delve my meanings from my words and body language he knows me inside and out and with him there is no hiding of my true self for he seeks it out as sure as any bloodhound and finds my true heart, my true soul, the real me and he settles for nothing less demanding of me the truth of feeling the promise of forever, the security of love he's more than a friend, more than a lover he's the true mating of my soul with his the final touches on the canvas of my life A woman has got to love a bad man once or twice in her life to be thankful for a good one. Mae West (1892-1980) |
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Ladycat 
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
That was wonderful. I know that feeling. I know that feeling ahhhh tooo well. I hope that you never stop having that feeling. Such a great piece. I will have to share this with a few of my friends, if you don't mind. I have been trying to explain my feelings for a long time and you wrote them just right. Thank you so much for the writing. Love, Lady Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Heather, it is soooo good to see you back in the Forums, especially with the one you care so much for. Welcome back, hon.  BTW, me likes this one mucho! Alicat |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Heather, this is sooo beautiful and makes me sit here in awe filled with the wonderful feeling you created with this poem. I'm so happy love has found you.  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Love is so beautifl when it's presented in this way...this is a fabulous write and you are very much appreciated through my eyes! |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
X-Angel, What a beautiful read. So much depth of love and contentment. You are a lucky woman, and your love is equally as lucky to have found a heart so full of expression... Elise |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Heather~ Sounds like you've got yourself a great guy. Best of luck to the both of you....have a wonderful Valentine's Day!  |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
It has been revealed, by anonymous sources, that the dreamer of dreams feels incredibly happy too  Suburbia is where the developer bulldozes out the trees, then names the streets after them. - Bill Vaughan |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi X Angel, Its so nice to read of true love, you have penned a beauty here, and I am so happy for you finding someone that really understands you thats something that does not happen often. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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