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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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as tiny little teeth of shark - remnants of my shattered heart - I gently scoop a tube to save to rest them on a mirror'd grave. "Shake it gently," is my urge, "careful, slowly make it turn..." and sharpened bits meet end-to-end to build a pattern new again. Mandala! With each turn of wrist Pingala! in her healing bliss-- puzzle pieces smoothly fit, reflections of infinite kiss. (A glance away means wisdom missed) another spirit step - remiss. A starburst blooms each memory (Oh see, how good you are for me?) You made me look, see beauty--rare in broken soul beyond repair. *  *[This message has been edited by serenity (edited 02-14-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
THIS IS FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!! "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is pure magic. Thank you!  |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
yep, i had a friend like this once, he helped me see me pretty, he helped me...like me...you painted it perfect :P |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
in her healing bliss-- puzzle pieces smoothly fit, reflections of infinite kiss. (A glance away means wisdom missed) another spirit step - remiss. A starburst blooms each memory (Oh see, how good you are for me?) You made me look, see beauty--rare in broken soul beyond repair. ==================== I already knew you were a beauty ... even before reading this very very cool and masterful pen stroke of metaphor and rhyme divine ... AWESOME write me twin ... you rock baby  In the evening when you see my eyes Looking back at you no disguise Im not sure who you think youll see Im just hoping youll still know that its me |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
jellybeans may be the ditto queen, but I'll have to ditto her this time. *S* Great poem... I especially love the last 2 lines! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Celeste you're growing leaps and bounds...this is so good!! ethome |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hey. . . I really like this one. . . you're developing this style of yours wonderfully. . . it's growing every day. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Very good, serenity...I loved the rhythm and flow to this.....a colorful piece....thanks for sharing....peace! Nathan |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Enjoyed the read.  Poeminister |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Loved the rhythm and flavor of this one. Tres unique! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Kathleen--many thank yous, gentle heart! sharon? thank YOU. jellybeans...funny, I've never seen me the way that others do. But thanks for all the yummy compliments...HUGS twin poet! Janet Marie...another twin...lol...it's okay I've got plenty of personalities...quite enough to go around! Thank you, and praise God that we survived another Valentine's Day, eh? HUGS. suthern...thank you so much for not just reading, but for your kind understanding as well. I'm feeling "huggy" so HUGS for you too. ethome...that's ME...leaping and bounding all over the place! rofl..and so gracefully too! Merci beau coup to you. Sven...many thanks to you. I appreciate your kindness more than I can say! Nate? Thank you so much. Poe...I'm always please to know that you've read! Virginia...I appreciate it! Thank you. Thanks again to all and HUGS TO FORUM. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I miss you Karen |
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