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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2001-02-14 12:32 PM


as tiny little teeth of shark -
remnants of my shattered heart -
I gently scoop a tube to save
to rest them on a mirror'd grave.

"Shake it gently," is my urge,
"careful, slowly make it turn..."
and sharpened bits meet end-to-end
to build a pattern new again.

Mandala!
With each turn of wrist
Pingala!
in her healing bliss--
puzzle pieces smoothly fit,
reflections of infinite kiss.
(A glance away means wisdom missed)
another spirit step - remiss.

A starburst blooms each memory
(Oh see, how good you are for me?)

You made me look, see beauty--rare
in broken soul beyond repair.

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[This message has been edited by serenity (edited 02-14-2001).]

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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-02-14 06:23 AM


THIS IS FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis



Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2001-02-14 08:45 AM


This is pure magic. Thank you!
jellybeans
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3 posted 2001-02-14 09:49 AM


yep, i had a friend like this once, he helped me see me pretty, he helped me...like me...you painted it perfect :P
Janet Marie
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4 posted 2001-02-14 12:15 PM


in her healing bliss--
puzzle pieces smoothly fit,
reflections of infinite kiss.
(A glance away means wisdom missed)
another spirit step - remiss.

A starburst blooms each memory
(Oh see, how good you are for me?)

You made me look, see beauty--rare
in broken soul beyond repair.
====================

I already knew you were a beauty ...
even before reading this very very cool
and masterful pen stroke of metaphor and rhyme divine ...
AWESOME write me twin ... you rock baby

In the evening when you see my eyes
Looking back at you no disguise
Im not sure who you think youll see
Im just hoping youll still know that its me

suthern
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5 posted 2001-02-14 04:55 PM


jellybeans may be the ditto queen, but I'll have to ditto her this time. *S* Great poem... I especially love the last 2 lines!
ethome
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6 posted 2001-02-14 05:17 PM


Hey Celeste you're growing leaps and bounds...this is so good!! ethome
Sven
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7 posted 2001-02-14 06:39 PM


hey. . . I really like this one. . .

you're developing this style of yours wonderfully. . . it's growing every day. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Nate Dogg
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8 posted 2001-02-15 02:14 AM


Very good, serenity...I loved the rhythm and flow to this.....a colorful piece....thanks for sharing....peace!

Nathan

Poeminister
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9 posted 2001-02-15 02:22 AM


Enjoyed the read.

Poeminister

VAS
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Oregon
10 posted 2001-02-15 08:45 AM


Loved the rhythm and flavor of this one. Tres unique!
serenity blaze
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11 posted 2001-02-15 09:30 AM


Kathleen--many thank yous, gentle heart!

sharon? thank YOU.

jellybeans...funny, I've never seen me the way that others do. But thanks for all the yummy compliments...HUGS twin poet!

Janet Marie...another twin...lol...it's okay I've got plenty of personalities...quite enough to go around! Thank you, and praise God that we survived another Valentine's Day, eh? HUGS.

suthern...thank you so much for not just reading, but for your kind understanding as well. I'm feeling "huggy" so HUGS for you too.

ethome...that's ME...leaping and bounding all over the place! rofl..and so gracefully too! Merci beau coup to you.

Sven...many thanks to you. I appreciate your kindness more than I can say!

Nate? Thank you so much.

Poe...I'm always please to know that you've read!

Virginia...I appreciate it! Thank you.

Thanks again to all and HUGS TO FORUM.

Michael
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California
12 posted 2019-01-14 09:23 PM


I miss you Karen
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