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Sunshine |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London 
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Sunshine ~~~ As droplets cling fast to an icicle their silent plea echoes in vain A mist gently lifts when the shade reaps the sun And a tear wets the dirt once again ~~~ |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Glad to see you here Rex! Loved the poem too...beautiful... |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
Precisely tuned, perfectly executed! A lovely portrayal! Lary |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Nice form, it collaberated with the words nicely lovely poem Jeremy Life is fading me away, far away, but I’m sketching myself back, line by line, mark by mark. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Bravo Rex.... I must agree with the others Irie Much enjoyed!  ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Opps....hick-up! [This message has been edited by Irie (edited 02-13-2001).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
yes simple and nice..I like it.. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Sorry it's not something better, but I'm just not writing too well lately ... not even sure why I posted this, except that it's almost spring and that means I can get back working in the yard and ponds again Thanks for the kind replies everyone Rex |
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bad little dog Junior Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 38city pound |
the submit button locked my computer ... weird ... |
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