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Your Touch
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Your Touch |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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Your Touch I dream, and sense your presence near me I know I'm not alone in my room Then I see your beautiful face Radiant, smiling, laughter dispelling gloom Warming me, a night tease succubus Kidding, joshing, stroking my back I feel unspoken love in your ways I smile, laugh and tease in attack I trace my finger on your mouth Your smile communicates your trust Then deeper feelings take control Overwhelming us we know we must You can see the fire in my eyes The passion, my very fire The longing need to make us one Driven by the hunger you inspire Then we're together, clasping grasping Our eyes alone, no words are spoken My salvation, sleep o'ertakes me Just your touch, a trust never broken Great souls have wills; feeble ones have only wishes. ~ Chinese Proverb ~ |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Now sir, that is one HOT touch. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wilfred, That's what I was going to say, enjoyed the read |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
What a beautiful and romantic touch. Very well written.  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Geez Mr. Yeats...up the pole a notch, would ya? Huh? |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill--You sure know how to dream! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Dream on sir...if your dreams bring poetry like this Life's a game...but who says you have to follow the rules? |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Wil~ Great write, penned superbly Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
such a longing there, written with your style and perfection..... Lovely write Bill....Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
You're smokin on this one Wilfred |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I agree with what everyone else says...this is a superb write! Nathan |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A beautiful, hot write - I really loved this one! The last verse is amazing! Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Good morning, Bill.... It's 7AM in Alaska, cold, wet, and I was shivering badly until I read this!! Nice and warm in here now!!  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
MMmmmmm how right you are Bill "no need for words, tis in the touch As always sweet and tender this I loved so much hope |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
inot2B- I'm glad you liked ~G~ Thank You Seymour- Took the words fom your mouth eh? - ~G~ - such words are a high compliment to me I appreciate your reply very much. LW- I'm glad you saw it as I intended - Thank you Karilea- I think if you just write with your typical talent - the challenge will be mine again with no difficulty ~G~ -Thank You Marite - Paula - Dreams are what I have - in some ways - all I have - Thank you Tracie- Thank you so much GreenEyes- I'm glad you saw my longing - Thank you Ruth- I gave up those weeds - but I still need an RN's TLC ~G~ - thank you Nathen- I'm glad I pleased - Thank you Melissa- I truly appreciate your reply - ~S~ - Thank you Sunny- Anytime I can warm you up just ask - ~G~ Thank you Hope - I try - it's who I am - Thank you |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
"Just your touch, a trust never broken" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ WILFRED, I enjoyed the expression here as well as the flow and the above verse I quote just locked into my attention and I gotta tell ya you have a sweet way with words in expression... As always, it's a pleasure to read your poetry and I thank you coco |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
WY~ Whew!! and then......Whew!! very romantic.......VERY hot! Really liked this very much -SEA |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
Ooers-- a dream to envy! --Artistic-- "Dreams are the touchstones of our characters" -Henry David Thoreau |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Even "warm" is quite lovely....BTTT |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Coco- Such a trust once built - should NEVER be broken ~S~ Thank you SEA- (grinning) I'm glad you liked Thank you Artistic- Yes - I agree - tis a dream to envy Karilea- Thanks for resuscitating - again - I might have failed to thank deserving replies - you are sweet - Now: what's 'bttt'? |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Back To The Top {~,^} |
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