Open Poetry #12 |
I Love Yu |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I Love Yu Yu will it ever be just me and you? Can I kiss you? May I hug you? Will I ever do everything I possibly can to love you? You are the angel of my dreams. You are the lake and river, the trees and streams. You are the mountain I desire to climb. You are the forest I yearn to be mine. You are my beautiful valentine. I am thankful that God made a woman such as you. And I will tell you this Yu. This guys in love with you. JamesLee@February12,2001 forYuKangHo. sheisMichelle JagiyaNaSarangHa |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
so sweet, she is every Yu(You) in your poem..making it twice as nice..*s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Completely beautiful! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Sweet poem...wonderful write! Nathan |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Wynter, dreamkeeper and Nate....James |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi James, How sweet, looks like the arrow made its mark, I am happy for you. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you sweet angel Cerenity...James |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
very clever by using her name on the title....loved the read...thanks So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Jill Member
since 2001-02-02
Posts 62Louisiana |
Will I every do everything I possibly can to love you. You are well on your way with this poem. |
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