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The Pain and the Passion
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The Pain and the Passion |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN 
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In silent moments alone with the moon I'm taken back to the warmth we knew........... Passion with all it's fury burning to the touch almost painful in a way and it's never quite enough A lover's touch remembered with such fire now I know the meaning of true and deep desire The lips that send those sparks to places underneath my heart and undo the laces One by one defenses fall till skin on skin collide and melt into the darkness where love is after all (written in a moment of intense memory.. and that moment is "now") Kindest regards, Kay-lynn |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Oh how well I know that feeling (sigh) |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Kay-lynn, what memories! *sigh* What a beautiful poem. Dee |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Very passionate! Good poem.  |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
Thank you for the kind words. I can always count on you guys to relate. Kay-lynn **A dream is a wish your heart makes :) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Nice writing, Kay-Lynn. Nice to see you here again. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Gee, why do a man's touch have so much power? Don't we feel helpless in love? What an inspiration! It takes me back to that vulnerable moment in which only passion matters. Very nice. |
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