A mystery (finished or unfished? u tell me)

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Open Poetry #12

A mystery (finished or unfished? u tell me)

Artistic
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 107
Colorado/Rochester, NY

0 posted 2001-01-12 09:48 PM

A lost soul
Wandering
Amongst people
Who deem themselves found

A mystery
As much to herself
As to others

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-01-12 09:55 PM

Ohhhh, I do like this very much!!! I don't think it's finished.......simply because I'd like to read more of this!

-SEA

Beckalini
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since 2001-01-02

Posts 151
Yorkshire, England

2 posted 2001-01-12 10:00 PM

I agree with SEA, it would be great to read more....but I also thinks it works perfectly well as it is

~Becky~

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

3 posted 2001-01-12 10:02 PM

Oh yes indeed, I too would loved to read on...please add more for our enjoyment...great write
Tracie~< !signature-->

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

[This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 01-13-2001).]

Artistic
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 107
Colorado/Rochester, NY

4 posted 2001-01-13 01:31 AM

SEA-- I'll try! Although the words writ in pen was by pure inspiration. Words simply came, then stopped. I shall have to wait and see if anything happens!

Becky-- Thanks.

That's what I thought... both unfinished and finished. A mystery, no?

Tracie-- Like I said... I'll try!

Thanks!

--Artistic--

"Dreams are the touchstones of our characters"
-Henry David Thoreau

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