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Mystic Oceans........Tanka
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Mystic Oceans........Tanka |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 Mystic Oceans Deep mystic oceans Captured by your vivid eyes Enchanting magic Within daydreams of cloud nine Put a spell on valentine Charisma 12/02/01 |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ How pretty, how pretty. You do these lovely Tankas with such beauty. Always a pleasure to read. Love n' hugs ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you do this format and syllable count such justice with your imagery weel done Charisma ... cute twist adding in the valentine theme  Where the touch of the lover ends And the soul of the friend begins There's a need to be separate and a need to be one And a struggle neither wins |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very nice charisma! and i love the picture too   , g"maybe one day we can turn and face our fears maybe one day we can reach out through our tears..." -a grant |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Marge thank you for your always lovely comment...glad that you like this Tanka my friend. Janet Marie: thank you my friend, and the image pulls me into the valentine twist.... dgvarner: thank you, glad that you loved both. |
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shawana Junior Member
since 2000-11-02
Posts 14 |
"...not knowing exactly what tanka means: besides syllables-count..." This one is just gorgeous,picture as well as the poem, to the point that even I understand fully the meaning behind this...;-) |
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