Open Poetry #12 |
Drunk again |
Mendy Junior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 34 |
Even the illusion is not as convincing as it was when I was 19 had my first drink got drunk, fell down, woke up, with every ping a gong it was the truest escape then, reality? miles away my friend, but then reality was good no money, no job, no worries. These days I stumble in thinking - no matter how drunk I get reality shrouds the illusion can't break through the clouds don't even wake up with a banging head just early,and promising to quit again. if it is true that the world talks toomuch then let us all keep quiet and hear the eloquence of silence - Richard Ntiru |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Mendy - On this Monday morning - a day that I begin working with a group of teenage girls in an alcoholism rehab facility, this is a truly apt poem to begin my day... Very apt indeed...Nicely done.. Waft every crest upon your destined sea. Embrace the Wave of Serendipity, Lest its elusive arcane ecstasy Refurl with sail for all eternity. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Very honest...very accurate descriptions. If I didn't hate the saying, 'been there, done that...'; I'ld use it here. Don't wake up with a banging head, anymore? Seems a hobby of youth has become a career choice. Promising to quit? Promising who? Thanks for sharing this. Looking forward to hearing more from you. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
very very honest - having had personal experiences with family members who were heavy drinkers this touches a deep part of me. thanks for it K ...and I have found that a lifetime can be lived in one moment... T.G.M. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"everywhere ya go? there you are..." just ask anybody around here...run into myself several times a day. HUGS |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
LOTS OF HUGS. Hang in there. Hugs, ME |
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