Open Poetry #12 |
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Drunk again |
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Mendy Junior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 34 |
Even the illusion is not as convincing as it was when I was 19 had my first drink got drunk, fell down, woke up, with every ping a gong it was the truest escape then, reality? miles away my friend, but then reality was good no money, no job, no worries. These days I stumble in thinking - no matter how drunk I get reality shrouds the illusion can't break through the clouds don't even wake up with a banging head just early,and promising to quit again. if it is true that the world talks toomuch then let us all keep quiet and hear the eloquence of silence - Richard Ntiru |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Mendy - On this Monday morning - a day that I begin working with a group of teenage girls in an alcoholism rehab facility, this is a truly apt poem to begin my day... Very apt indeed...Nicely done.. ![]() Waft every crest upon your destined sea. Embrace the Wave of Serendipity, Lest its elusive arcane ecstasy Refurl with sail for all eternity. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Very honest...very accurate descriptions. If I didn't hate the saying, 'been there, done that...'; I'ld use it here. Don't wake up with a banging head, anymore? Seems a hobby of youth has become a career choice. Promising to quit? Promising who? Thanks for sharing this. Looking forward to hearing more from you. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
very very honest - having had personal experiences with family members who were heavy drinkers this touches a deep part of me. thanks for it ![]() ...and I have found that a lifetime can be lived in one moment... T.G.M. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"everywhere ya go? there you are..." just ask anybody around here...run into myself several times a day. HUGS |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
LOTS OF HUGS. Hang in there. Hugs, ME |
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