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Hope & Faith
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Hope & Faith |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Hope and Faith I shift and sift the sands of time solemnly, only in my mind and weigh the say of daily pray and wonder if I'll make the climb too much lost on love long spent and too soon to have reached content though softest croon lies deep in my throat it's caught, the note it hardly floats I can't sing for solace to bring ~ but the rains, they come again ~ fleeting, albeit, the sad gray days so I sift and shift the moments away in rhyme of time a sip of wine and look forward to what might be ~ for hope, you see… carries me…. ~ the moment will pass, while looking glass glazes o'er the truth of sure… and I gather in then blot up the spilled dreams of a loving cup but drips and drops are left behind sweeter fallen than in my mind and curse not I the roads traversed for they have all rehearsed me to where I shall stage my written page for the war's been waged and gone is the rage… and gone, too, the grief lacking, tho, a sense of relief ~ but hope, you see, carries me…. and faith… ~ that I shall find the best that's yet to be e'en if told for now my dreams are naught but fallacy I shall dream my dreams, anyway and believe in the belief that come what may this striving gives goal to find the shoal that shall harbor me as my dreams foresee…. for hope, and faith, carry me. 02.11.01 Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Good one. I shall dream my dreams, anyway and believe in the belief that come what may this striving gives goal to find the shoal that shall harbor me as my dreams foresee…. for hope, and faith, carry me. Enjoyed. *L* |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Sy....thank you....{~,^} |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari dear heart, how utterly utterly truly wonderful is this piece from you utterly fabulous work love. Oh how much this calls to me, it really sings in my soul. Just when I think I might be reaching a little further you show me how vain I really am. This is such brilliant work love, superb truly terrific. ======================================== and gone, too, the grief lacking, tho, a sense of relief ~ but hope, you see, carries me…. and faith… ~ that I shall find the best that's yet to be e'en if told for now my dreams are naught but fallacy I shall dream my dreams, anyway and believe in the belief that come what may this striving gives goal to find the shoal that shall harbor me as my dreams foresee…. ======================================= when you whispered I heard and responded, fabulous.  Take care love as always Puck  You know I love this don't you? Good because I do. Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
{~,^}...thank you Marsha....I am so glad you caught the whispering.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I shall dream my dreams, anyway and believe in the belief that come what may this striving gives goal to find the shoal that shall harbor me as my dreams foresee…. for hope, and faith, carry me. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ wonderful.....for hope and faith, carry me.... yes we must always behold our hope and faith and have our dreams to believe. I have learned that, not so long ago *s* excellent my friend. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You know, Charisma, I almost didn't add those lines...I had thought the poem done before I had reached them... I'm so very glad they found their way in... thank you! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Wonderful write. I always find myself with less of a foggy mind after reading your works. Enjoyed this muchly. take care, Poeminister |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Poeminister, that is a wonderful comment, thank you... |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
How true is is that we not lament the roads that brought us here because, although rocky, we have arrived at this place because of them....very poignant, sunshine |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
You have such beautiful rhythm to your poetry. I find when I'm tense and need to relax, I need to go look for you! Thank you!!!!  To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
'Deer, my thoughts exactly....thank you... Dreamkeeper...what a lovely comment, thank you! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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