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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Stars Star hung lanterns glare silently Shine diamond accents long and strong They Braille my ship that sails along. Brand me gypsy wild and tipsy. They talk to me of weathers flare And wink at me in sly of flirt Like the curt of a women’s skirt That wiles me to a whimsy’s dare Their beautiful, a fairy land A hoary gaze of pure amaze A tapestry in wild ablaze A Jackson Pollok painted grand. They speak to me of lore and goal Make troubadour my heart in store They orbit me to evermore And palette hews into my soul. They give me cues of bright and sight They light a path into the night. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 02-11-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This likes me so much that it forged a trail straight into my library....even tho the Gypsy may wander....this poem has found a home.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Star hung lanterns glare silently Shine diamond accents long and strong They Braille my ship that sails along. Brand me gypsy wild and tipsy. They talk to me of weathers flare And wink at me in sly of flirt Like the curt of a women’s skirt That wiles me to a whimsy’s dare ==================== A hoary gaze of pure amaze A tapestry in wild ablaze ===================== They orbit me to evermore And palette hews into my soul. They give me cues of bright and sight They light a path into the night. ================ oh my ... look whos dancing in the stars so fine .. and this poem equals their shine and your clever rhyme is divine .. and now I make this one mine. *winkiewinkie* and these two lines...... "They Braille my ship that sails along. Brand me gypsy wild and tipsy." they couldnt be any cooler if they drank raspberry Kool-aid .. that whole first verse is kissed with stardust!! OH and by the way.... NO one better be winkin at you but me .. not even Twinkle little star *L*  Where the touch of the lover ends And the soul of the friend begins There's a need to be separate and a need to be one And a struggle neither wins |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Beautifully written! Love the way you've weaved your words. To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
What a ride through the tides of the heavens this one is. Exceptionally well done and I absolutely love the images in this one and the strength of the wind that fills it's sails. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
They talk to me of weathers flare And wink at me in sly of flirt Like the curt of a women’s skirt That wiles me to a whimsy’s dare made me smile...you write so nice I sometimes have to ~Sigh afterwards...when I reread and think about it's meaning to me ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Cute answer. *L* JM, You are a whole band of pixies and the delight of my day. WW S Dreamkeeper, A big thank you. Mark, Thank you for the beautiful comment. Nkad, THank you for the read and lovely comment. |
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