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Blindly walks the writer
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Blindly walks the writer with his notebook in one hand, the other hand in his pocket. The night covers his shadow, as the moonlight gazes. Eyes to the ground, fast he paces. His mind always racing. No one knows his sorrows, except his pen and paper. Blindly walks the writer with his notebook in one hand, the other hand in his pocket. In the crowd, he becomes no one. In his loneliness he knows no one. In his mind his name is toss around from person to person, then his smiles. And with that thought, he embrazes the dawn. He takes his handkerchive and spread it on the night. Blindly walks the writer with his notebook in one hand , the other hand in his pocket. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Welcome, walker ~~~ I would love to welcome you to Passions, and a wonderful entry it is with this one.....an introduction to your family here!! Great read!! ~~~ enjoy yourself ~~~ it's later than you think! [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (edited 02-11-2001).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family!! Enjoyed this read. Please check your email for a special greeting.  |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Nice first!! Very good descriptions...I could see the writer walking. Thanks!! Looking forward to more. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This reminds me somewhat of a poem by Frank O'Hara about pockets and notebooks... well done - and welcome to Passions.  K- it was not an unmusical sound: long, falling, half a sigh, like wind in the wires, or a train distancing. The Muse of Distance, A. Williamson |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
that was an amazing bit o thought you've penned. i dig it. mind if i put it in my library? i'm feelin this one all the way. great first post. and welcome. hope ya enjoy your stay. You gotta love livin, cause dyin's a pain in the ass. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
excellent. . . we all walk that walk as writers I believe. . . welcome!!! ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
excellent. . . we all walk that walk as writers I believe. . . welcome!!! ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Welcome to Passions In Poetry. I'll be looking for more of your writing. I enjoyed this very much!  "This above all-ask yourself in the stillest hour of your night:MUST I write? Delve into yourself for a deep answer. Rainer Maria Rilke from "Le |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
No one knows his sorrows, except his pen and paper. Yes, this was very well expressed ~S~ welcome ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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