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Sweet Caress (acrostic)
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Sweet Caress (acrostic) |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Sweet Caress (acrostic) Surrounded essence Wanting more Engulfs me in Entwining souls Turning me around Close fit, I submit Arousing transmissions Romantic indulgence Elixir of your heart Soft and mild oh, so wild Shared feathered motion ah, sweet caress tenderness sublime all mine oh, your touch heals so much delights invites to feel so real |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
Well done, well said, if I may be so bold. Acrostic seems to suit thee well. Nice read. AT While it may be true that "No man is an island..." You must admit there are some extremely large peninsulas out there. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
feels wonderful helen. . . this is excellent. . .  ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely acrosticizing. Nicely done. Poeminister |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Very gentle one Helen. Nice Rich |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I can't wait for someone to write something like this for me  this is simply perfect So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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