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Equal Parts.......for all
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Equal Parts.......for all |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Equal Parts I sigh you in my mornings as the sun begins it's rise and capture every bit of you in words with hazel eyes. I lay the thoughts into my mind and softly dream each phrase dance the rhythms in my heart as fires ignite and blaze. Captured in my heart, you've been I've trapped your voice, your face with every sigh I sing of now you've filled that special place. A valentine is just a shape designed in equal parts But completed when it's filled with love that meets within two hearts. xoxox....xoxox xoxoxoxoxoxox xoxoxoxoxox xoxoxoxox xoxox xx ~Wynter/M to all of you, whose "voices" on here touch me... have a wonderful Valentine's Week "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nice Wynter and thanks from me it's a wonderful Valentine greeting! Reality seldom bears the possibilities of imagination! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Wynter - what a beautiful Valentine for me. Ha, had to say that. This is a beautiful poem you have written, may they all be as tender as this one. BC |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
E..no thank you, for all your very warm responses...they help ease any worries that come my way.. hey and my reality has absorbed my fantasies...and tho two shall become one huggz to you ~Wynter BC... Haaaa, knew you would..was wondering if you were going to say that about my secret ones too *w...just add tender to that long middle name of mine..*s ~Wynter thanks you both "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Personally, I'll be wearing a black arm band on the 14th...Haha. Nonetheless, your words and images are beautiful. You made me smile, in spite of myself! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Nakd-- Lovely valentine. Beautifully penned. Poeminister |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I LOVE that first line...I sigh you in my mornings...one of those lines where you say 'damn I wish that was mine' lol Lovely write...  K- it was not an unmusical sound: long, falling, half a sigh, like wind in the wires, or a train distancing. The Muse of Distance, A. Williamson [This message has been edited by Severn (edited 02-11-2001).] |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Oh, that was beautiful! I enjoyed this and I really like that first line also. I so have been there! Beautiful write.  Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
JLR..I love to spite people...have a wonderful day tomorrow anyway huggzzz *w Poeminister..thank you for the kind words Severn..you can make it yours if you wish...we all sigh the mornings I think...  Sauni..nice to know you can feel that too...thank you..some mornings it pays to get up ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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