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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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You Give To Me you give to me the morning sun to pocket in my heart to carry 'til the nighttime calls in sleep, warmth to impart you give to me the simplest smile though not so simple 'cause when e'er your face appears to me my heatbeat seems to pause you give to me the coupon that says 'love you ever more' no date of expiration there 'forever' words so pure and when you whisper on the wind the sounds of feelings true you give to me the best there is for what you give is 'you'. once upona time...2 ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'you give to me the simplest smile though not so simple 'cause when e'er your face appears to me my heatbeat seems to pause' Wonderful write, wynter! Love this, especially these lines...whew...how I can relate to this! sp  everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
The feelings, the love, the poignancy - hello, my friend, this is beautiful! . The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Love the flow and cadence of this wonderful write Wynter very well written indeed! Reality seldom bears the possibilities of imagination! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is very nice, little one....very nice.... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
sp ...having much snow there? ours finally melted, thank you for your very kind words...~smiles Rosemary...thank you my friend *s...I have been enjoying your thoughts E...Flo and Cadence..my middle names...haaaaa sweet, you are ..huggzz Sunshine...I always appreciate your kind words, thank you ~S~ ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Wynter - once more you have written a beauty. How you do it time after time, is a wonderment in me. BC |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
it's your responses, Bill..they keep my warm thoughts flowing *w ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ah yes. . . I really liked this one Wynter. . . wonderful. . .  --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) What a lovely poem! I especially loved the ending, which plays as an eternal sequel of true love. Excellent poem, my friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sven You would love this you are such a romantic huggz ~~Wynter Noah and thank you for sharing your thoughts with me..*s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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