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“a Perfect Day”
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“a Perfect Day” |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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The darkness of the night has gone away… Making room for crystal morn, and clear bright light of day… Sun is shining in the sky… Clouds are floating gently by… Harmony below and up above… Today’s a perfect day to fall in love! It’s Saturday, a perfect day to rest… Just hangin’ out around the house, your cozy little nest… Watch tv and eat some ‘Smores… Take a day to skip the chores… Give yourself a simple carefree day… Today’s a perfect day…so let it stay! Twilight shadows creeping ‘round the yard… Daytime sun’s retreating fast, and dark is falling hard… Bathe in bubbles…candles burn… A long-forgotten peace returns… Soak while watching shadows dance above… And dream of perfect days to fall in love…  ~~~ enjoy yourself ~~~ it's later than you think! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, once the men of Passions see this....it'll stay at the top like a balloon....a fun write! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'It’s Saturday, a perfect day to rest… Just hangin’ out around the house, your cozy little nest… Watch tv and eat some ‘Smores… Take a day to skip the chores…' Yes, this would definitely be a perfect day! Very fun write!  Love it!sp  ...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea, oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Sunshine! Well.......the picture just yelled out to be joined to the poem, and it's hard to show a bubble bath without skin!! Ha!! I hope others enjoy.......i enjoyed writing it!  ~~~ enjoy yourself ~~~ it's later than you think! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
snowpants... It just sounded like a great way to spend a Saturday, right down to the end-of-the-day soak!! Thank you!! ~~~ enjoy yourself ~~~ it's later than you think! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny - falling in love, what a wonderful thought. And you tell it so well, you from the great state of Alaska. BC |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Mornin' Bill... Thank you, my friend, and it's nice to see you here this morning!! Yes...some folks even fall in love way up here!! ~~~ enjoy yourself ~~~ it's later than you think! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Cheezzz when did you dye your hair sis??  Anyday when one can fall in love is bound to be a good day. Beautiful write from you and so are the thoughts bring on the quiet of the world. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Brother... Thought I'd try out being a blonde!! You know what they say about blondes having more fun? Well, it's a lie!! As you see, I'm here alone in my bubble bath!! Ha!! Thank you, brother dear, and it's back to chestnut color for me!! ~~~ enjoy yourself ~~~ it's later than you think! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh my.....great way to spend some time....yeah a soaking bath. enjoyed the poem a lot. Charisma |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Charisma ~~~ A little bubbly, a few bubbles, some vanilla scented candles, and shadows dancing on the ceiling. The rest is up to your own imagination!! Thank you!! ~~~ enjoy yourself ~~~ it's later than you think! |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
This somehow makes winter seem like summer.. Dream on Sunnyone..... ~ live and let live ~ |
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