A friendship lost, a new one gained

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Open Poetry #12

A friendship lost, a new one gained

pixiechild
Junior Member

since 2001-02-02

Posts 35

0 posted 2001-02-10 11:50 AM

before i begin this was a poem i wrote after i broke a friendship with one of my best friends, cause she couldn't accept the last poem i wrote her telling her exactly how i feel.

enjoy
Now it hurts really like mad,
but i can't see it as that bad
telling u the absolute truth
of me making such a choise in my youth

Realizing now where we stand
in this already confussing land
It really hurts like mad
but in a way i'm not sad
to admit our friendship is waving goodbye
and for sure, thats no lie

It mad me mad
to loose a friendship we had
cause you couldn't accept the choise i made
making it feel like a sharpened blade
going through my heart and soul,
my eyes feeling like a burning cole
just because my choise u couldn't accept
now i lost all my respect.

What itold that day
made our friendship to fade away
The pain is no relieve
and in our friendship i stopped to believe
I found a new friend
that accepts my choise to the end.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-02-10 08:13 PM

very interesting words here. . . the choices that we make sometimes. . .

well done. . .

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