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Open Poetry #12

Lust not love

pixiechild
Junior Member

since 2001-02-02

Posts 35

0 posted 2001-02-10 11:27 AM

Why was I so blind to see,
that we were never meant to be
Should have listened to my friend
and I wouldn't have been hurt in the end
Never thought it would be this way
but still had a feeling day after day

I knew the day would come
as you listen to some
when they tell you harsh little lies
that made us lead to sudden goodbyes

At first I was really sad
but now I couldn't be more glad
learning alot from my mistakes
no matter how long it takes...
lying to myself for so long
couldn't have been more wrong
Our "love" like a dying dove,
but now I realize it was lust not love.

Hi ever1

this poem i wrote to my ex boyfriend...my second poem I've ever written...so please tell me what u think.

lovies
me

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-02-10 11:34 AM

Ahhhhhhh yes, I do remember what this is like........learning is very good.......if you hadn't learned from this experience, then I'd worry........

This is great!

-SEA

pixiechild
Junior Member

since 2001-02-02

Posts 35

2 posted 2001-02-10 11:41 AM

thanks sea the thought will be kept
me

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

3 posted 2001-02-10 12:00 PM

there's a difference?

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2001-02-10 12:04 PM

yeppers doreen!! let's call it perceptive reality! {see philosophy forum} lol

Thanks for the think tank here....

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

5 posted 2001-02-10 03:11 PM

'At first I was really sad
but now I couldn't be more glad
learning alot from my mistakes
no matter how long it takes...
lying to myself for so long
couldn't have been more wrong'

Love these lines, pixiechild! This is great! I wouldn't have guessed it was only your second poem! I really like this!
(also glad to see that you were able to learn the truth from such an experience...I know it's not easy

)

sp

...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea,
oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me...

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