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Beckalini
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since 2001-01-02

Posts 151
Yorkshire, England

0 posted 2001-01-12 03:38 PM

*~*Moonbeams Dance*~*

Moonbeams dance upon the crests,
A waveless ocean comes to rest
Upon the shores of this, my heart
And in the darkness, lights a spark
Of one love lost, another won
An endless journey has begun
So stem the flow, the sands of time
Sing gently to this heart of mine
A lullaby of where I belong
To float upon the winds of song
And speak to me of angel wings
Butterfly dreams and other things
To comfort me and bring me hope
And together we’ll provoke
A waveless ocean come to rest
And watch moonbeams dance upon the crests

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
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1 posted 2001-01-12 06:48 PM

The flow of this gorgeous poem is perfect! Loved this

-SEA

Beckalini
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since 2001-01-02

Posts 151
Yorkshire, England

2 posted 2001-01-12 06:53 PM

Thanks for your kind words SEA. I love your poetry and it means a lot to me that you enjoyed reading one of my pieces

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2001-01-12 06:58 PM

SEA said it perfectly for me! Lovely write.

jwesley

Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

4 posted 2001-01-12 07:24 PM

A very beautiful poem Becky.....and great expressions!

Nathan

Beckalini
Member

since 2001-01-02

Posts 151
Yorkshire, England

5 posted 2001-01-12 07:46 PM

jwesley and Nate Dogg - thank you so very much for your words of encouragement

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

6 posted 2001-01-12 07:59 PM

SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL!

The imagery and the flow is delightful, it reads like a song. I believe that this is the first poem that I have read by you and I am very impressed, I look forward to your next poem!

Take care,
Melissa

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

Beckalini
Member

since 2001-01-02

Posts 151
Yorkshire, England

7 posted 2001-01-12 08:03 PM

Melissa - got me all blushing here with your BIG response. Thank you

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

8 posted 2001-01-12 08:08 PM

Beckalini - I am glad to see that someone else still knows how to blush...a lost treasure, I believe...

well done!

Beckalini
Member

since 2001-01-02

Posts 151
Yorkshire, England

9 posted 2001-01-12 08:32 PM

Sunshine - is the 'well done' for the poem or for the blushing? lol. Either way....thank you

~Becky~

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

10 posted 2001-01-12 09:32 PM

Becka~
What a wonderful piece you have penned, flowing perfectly and with loads of beautiful images.....well done
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Artistic
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 107
Colorado/Rochester, NY

11 posted 2001-01-12 09:41 PM

From your flowing words come a beautiful flowing imagery! Beautifully done!

--Artistic--

"Dreams are the touchstones of our characters"
-Henry David Thoreau

Beckalini
Member

since 2001-01-02

Posts 151
Yorkshire, England

12 posted 2001-01-12 09:41 PM

Tracie - thank you very much for your kind words. And there I go blushing again! lol

Beckalini
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since 2001-01-02

Posts 151
Yorkshire, England

13 posted 2001-01-12 09:44 PM

Artistic - Your kind words mean a lot to me. Thank you

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