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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
 How it happened? I will always be uncertain. Still, I require your presence each day. Your love flows through me Like a soft melody, Without which I could not live. In this world of overanalyzing, I'd like to say you simplify it all for me; I need not worry about what tomorrow May throw my way. I live by the fact That you were the one destined for me, And I for you, And between us is an immense inferno. Had it not been for you, I'm not quite sure How I'd handle these emotions, But, you found me When I was about to throw my hands in the air And give it all up. No more do I sit in silence, Without a melody to pass the time, A song to lift my heart. More often than not, I find my eyes swelled with tears of joy, My soul inundated with verse. You broke through-- You destroyed the walls That hid my heart from Love. ...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea, oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
such a wonderful thing when those walls can be broken by the right one...............love this  -SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
No more do I sit in silence, Without a melody to pass the time, A song to lift my heart. More often than not, I find my eyes swelled with tears of joy, My soul inundated with verse. You broke through-- You destroyed the walls That hid my heart from Love. ==================== whew..he must be one heck of a carpenter  very cool poem of emotional gratitude SP sincere outpouring great write Heaven bound on wings of love, there's so much that you can rise above. I surrender heart and soul, sacrificed to a higher goal. ~DepechMode~ |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
How do these things happen. A good question you offer many answers within. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Its wonderful when you find someone that can breach the walls...the words you write are just so very true |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
SEA: yes, it is a wonderful thing...thank you! I'm glad you like this!  JM: um...yep! You bet!  Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it!  ATelamon: well, I'm not too sure either...but, I'm glad I could offer some answers! Thanks for reading! Paula: yes, most definitely! Sometimes it seems like you'd never let anyone past those defenses, let alone bring them down! Thank you! sp  ...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea, oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now who said that TNT don't come in small packages........your words just proved that one wrong. Nicely written my friend. Loved the intensity of this one and the overpowering feeling of a heart warming itself in the birth of a new love. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Why thank you, Mark...I am glad you like this one. Yes, the warmth of new love is quite intense, if I may say so...I truly appreciate you stopping by, m'friend!!  sp everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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