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Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

0 posted 2001-02-09 12:33 PM

Just Love

Like a candle in deep midnight
you burn and shine your love on me
and in the weave of our heart glow
within this house of years is we

The bed is worn from many nights
yet each was filled with your sweet touch
some cool cotton and some flannel
but each with love is filled with much

Sun and sky and earth you sing me
and I with words lift up my voice
and together harvest this way
giving the bounty of our choice

If a poem could complete the feel
of you still beside me waiting
it’s of the power you give to me
with your sweet anticipating

Ever now this sweet embracing
within my words of love listened
and in this keep we’ll stay in time
for with we our hearts are christened

[This message has been edited by Martie (edited 02-09-2001).]

NerudaStar
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since 2001-02-09

Posts 5
California, USA

1 posted 2001-02-09 12:43 PM

Absolutely stunning work! You give me hope for what my relationship will be down the road. Your words evoked all the images I want for myself in love. Wonderful work.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-02-09 12:53 PM

Sun and sky and earth you sing me
and I with words lift up my voice
=======================
If a poem could complete the feel
of you still beside me waiting
it’s of the power you give to me
with your sweet anticipating

Ever now this sweet embracing
within my words of love listened
and in this keep we’ll stay in time
for with we our hearts are christened
=================
OH YES!!!! ....

Martie girl wrote a glorious love poem and she kissed it with rhyme ...
and now its mine

WAYYYYYY COOOOOL
what a beauty of sincerety and respect ...
love this one Martie-girl
but ya knew that I would

Heaven bound on wings of love,
there's so much that you can rise above.
I surrender heart and soul,
sacrificed to a higher goal.
~DepechMode~

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-02-09 01:37 AM

Martie~
Somebody is singing mighty pretty !

'Sun and sky and earth you sing me
and I with words lift up my voice
and together harvest this way
giving the bounty of our choice'

Glorious thoughts.
I love ya', sweet Sis of song.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2001-02-09 10:44 AM

enjoy the read

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

5 posted 2001-02-09 02:50 PM

I've a mate I love - I only wish my love were as complete as what you've expressed

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

6 posted 2001-02-09 02:54 PM

Martie.....this is so ....YOU....

lucky
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since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

7 posted 2001-02-09 04:27 PM

Martie,

You certainly are christened with a lot more than any of us here really know... Did you notice it's getting harder around here to say "thank you" for responding,,? So I will say thank you here for your reply on "still well." You and Taylor have such loving hearts. Your both certainly God best.

love, dale
.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2001-02-09 04:43 PM

Martie,
Just beautiful, almost as beautiful as you.

Martie

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California

9 posted 2001-02-09 07:27 PM

My husband came home with a vase full of tulips last night...not just any tulips, but parot tulips...they are spectacular...and I said it's not valentines day yet, and he said, it doesn't have to be to express my love...so I asked him what I could give him...and ah-hum....he said, write me a poem.

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

10 posted 2001-02-11 06:27 PM

Dang girl...you do sing mighty purty when ya is feelin that love thang. This was lovely from title on down. What sweet words of romance from that pen of yours.

If you find yourself stranded in a storm
...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

11 posted 2001-02-11 06:34 PM

Martie that is so beautiful, your poem and your husbands showering of affection...~S~

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

12 posted 2001-02-11 06:46 PM

'If a poem could complete the feel
of you still beside me waiting
it’s of the power you give to me
with your sweet anticipating'

You've penned some wonderful lines here, Martie! I love the flow of this one! Thanks for sharing!

sp

everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips...
every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips...

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho

13 posted 2001-02-12 10:45 PM

I didn't see this poem until just now! It's so beautifully written, and mirrors so much of what I have been blessed with too.
Such wonderful love described here! Oh, I love it when someone else knows the pleasure and security and sweetness of long-term love in marriage! And few can describe it like you can, that's for certain!

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