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heartsong. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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for Melissa Honeybee why these tears dear one? tears like these shouldn't come from a heart of light a heart like yours you tell me that you've looked inside yourself and that all you've seen is a dark heart a dark and diseased heart I know that you've been through much dear one that you've suffered much at the hand of deepest darkness so much so that now you're beginning to believe the words you're listening to the songs that it sings minor melodies of pain and agony come now and wipe your tears dear one let me help you pick up the shards of the shattered mirror and show you your heart as we see it a heart of light full of rolling meadows and delicate flowers a heart where the Major melodies of love, happiness, and joy play and sing always look now dear one look now and be healed we will share your tears and we will hear your heartsong ---------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh, this is just so beautiful, I really needed this right now  You're a dear friend, and I thank you so much! I will always keep this! My heart hugs yours!  Your friend, Melissa~ [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 02-08-2001).] |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
A beautiful poem for a beautiful poet! And a writer with a very kind heart! I agree completely! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
sven.......you are so sweet & the poem is beautiful........what a great place this is....helen |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Sven...sometimes we need someone to notice us and pull us out of the gutter...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy the read |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful and caring!! :D Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
what a comforting and lovely piece you penned here for a wonderful poet. loved reading these excellent beauty ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I agree with the rest such a nice thing to do ~Maria~ |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sven, What a wonderful tribute to an awesome writer. I think the two of you should collaborate on one together... Love, Elise |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sweetly written, Sven... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thanks to all that have replied. . . your words do mean a lot to me. . . Melissa, I'm glad that you liked this my friend. . . wishing you all the best. . . love and life and light. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sven dear heart, this is utterly wonderful, I really love this one, it is the stuff my hearts dreams of. Utterly absolutely fabulous, it is your writing at it's best. Take care love as always Bubbles  absolutely excellent love and I'm keeping it too Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
beautiful words from you....lovely Sven.... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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