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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Echoes Of Remember ~*Marge Tindal*~  Echoes of remember come resounding off a Colorado canyon wall Bouncing me in ecstasy cascading in recall Holding on to the hope of love in it's return Echoes of remember how they burn burn burn The very night we parted you bellowed across the view Sweet echoes of remember I love you looove yooou looove yooou ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 02-09-2001).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Margie, this is, as always so well penned, and so creative. The echoes in those two lines are so clever and add to the theme of the empty canyon so perfectly! The rhyme, the flow and the longing is just right!  Luv ya, Melissa~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- Oh how I've missed reading your wonderful poems...I'm really glad I caught this one while it's still fresh in the forum... I absolutely love it... It's beautiful... Love ya, Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ Thank you so much. I enjoyed putting the picture with the words. I knew you'd like it, my friend. Appreciate the read. Big hugs from me to you. VICKY ! ! ! Had just got your e-mail and *poof !* there you are ... puts a great big smile on this lady's face, let me tell ya' ! Give your brother a big hug from me ! I miss you - I really miss you ! Hope you'll get to visit more frequently. Pretty please ! ! Lots of new stuff here - some funky - some debatable ! *snicker* Hurry home sweetie ... the muses are restless ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
I loved this Marge. The words, the image and the echo! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautiful echoes, Marge. Lovely write. Poeminister "The soul can split the sky in two, And let the face of God shine through." ~Millay |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
Amazing write, Marge! The arrangement and photo certainly add to the imagery, but you've caught it all in your words. So much meaning...Love it! Lary |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eloise~ Thank you so very much. That is the beautiful Black Canyon in Colorado ... it just seemed to fit my thoughts perfectly ! PoeMinister~ So very, very glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for letting me know. LaryALee~ Thanks so much for your reply. The words came first and then the lovely graphic seemed to set it off perfectly to me. Glad to know you enjoyed both. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Same-a-like ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--I love this...and you! |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
this is a puurdy lil' poem I tell ya! Just lettin' you know... I always seem to go about pitying myself; and all the while I'm being carried upon the grace of great winds. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I really liked this, Marge. I can get two conclusions out it, though. One bothers me in that it would be too too sad. So, since the photo's beautiful and the poem as well if I don't take that one route, I'll try to push it aside and bury it. Curious, though, is there anything biographical to this piece? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Echoes of remember come resounding off a Colorado canyon wall Bouncing me in ecstacy cascading in recall Holding on to the hope of love in it's return Echoes of remember how they burn burn burn ================== what a cool phrase ..."Echoes of remember" and I do so love the burn... very cool write Margiegirl... and HEY...got the thread on the first try  Heaven bound on wings of love, there's so much that you can rise above. I surrender heart and soul, sacrificed to a higher goal. ~DepechMode~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Thank you, lovie ! Same exact here ! ! EagleScorpion~ Well, sweetheart ... I'm here to tell you that I appreciate it very much. VAS~ Whatever ! Lighten up, chick ... It's just a - P uurdy O nline E cho M using You can always just look at the pictures !  JanetMarie~ Thank ya', darling ! ! Alright on the first try ! I NEED a sip of that raspberry tea ! Love n' hugs to ya', gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Hey........I am burning here.......in a longing to have the bounce back of whispers fill my ears. Way cool write my friend. Love the poem and the cool NEW phrase. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Marge as always wonderful...loved the echo, will always come over to enjoy your poetry, as I admire it.... Take care my friend, ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ You doll ! *Hugs* to you ! Charisma~ Thank you, my loving friend. You're such a sweetheart. *Note- I'm aware that ecstasy is spelled incorrectly in my poem, but I can't get an edit to correct it to take. I keep getting thrown out. So please be aware that I see my own mistakes too. Arghhhhh ! I'm going to try to correct it from my work station. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
The very night we parted you bellowed across the view Sweet echoes of remember I love you looove yooou looove yooou ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oh my! Express yourself girlfriend! Love the poem. Hugs, Deb |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ Thanks, love. Funny how some sounds universally stike a chord of remembrance in us all. I always appreciate you. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
those memories never seem to stop echoing softly in one's heart.............this is wonderful Marge! -SEA |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
a beautiful echo....so wonderful your words always....be well... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Yes, and I know you hear them too, sweetie. Thanks. GreenEyes~ I always appreciate knowing you've read me. Thank you so very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I loved the way the words echoed across the page Marge, this was really different and worked so well!! Well done sweetie. On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. Donna Smith |
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BillyBull Junior Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 15DeLand,Fl. USA |
Hi Sis, Liked the echo effect. Just thought I would let you know I made it to the new forum area. Me |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ Thank you so much. Nice to know you enjoyed it. BillyBull~ Hi brother ~ Glad you made it in okay. Enjoy - as I know you do. When ya' gonna write us a poem ? Yes you can ! Love ya' ~*Sis*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Just beautiful Marge...I could hear them and I could see it and I could feel it....very well done!! Reality seldom bears the possibilities of imagination! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ Thank you, friend. I like knowing you heard the echoes. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely, Marge!! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it a lot |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Thanks, my friend .... LOVE seeing that 'home page' icon on your name ! VanDana~ Thanks, honey. It's always good to see your name here. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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