Open Poetry #12 |
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The Lake |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa ![]() |
The Lake Take me back to the lake, Our neatly folded white flesh, Shivering, jean pool, Where homework left undone, And my first kiss, were my only fears, There, days stretched, From one heat hazed shore to the other, And Swallows and Amazons were gods, We lived their lives, and dreamed their dreams, And summer was infinate. Take me back to the Lake, My second love, My first, a man and a woman, Who promised the earth, And delivered. A childhood of magic, Of Camelot, Lark and lapwing egg, discovered, My fathers hands, Spinning brass bar into pawn and golden Knight. Take me back to the Lake, That deep serene memory, Of indigo pinafores, Sprinkled with galaxies of flour dust, My mothers arms, Cradling me from the pangs of puberty, Rose bowl lips, Smoothing my adolescent path, A gentle coaxing, Into my place in the world. Take me back to the Lake, Any lake will do, Sky and water enfold me, Let me look deep Into times reflection, To find, a boy, A man, and a woman, And bright brass castles, Towering over heat hazed shores, There, Swallows and Amazons are gods. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This....is so lovely.... |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Warm summer dreams and memories . . . I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing, OLIAS. |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Sunshine, Its lovely of you to reply, as I bare my adolescent soul, I'm touched thank you ![]() p.s someone check out the smiley for support O.M.G. I don't think thats quite right, we call it something different in the u.k. Krawdad, Thanks for your kind reply it was much appreciated. Take care Olias. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
What a wonderful piece of poetry this is. I truely loved each and every line of this one. The flow of it made it really easy to get follow and get lost in it's words. Great write. ps........I know what you mean by the smiley though.....been sort of afraid to use that one myself. ![]() |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Hey you!! ![]() wonderful poem of memories.. excellent imagery. well done poet sir take care jm Heaven bound on wings of love, there's so much that you can rise above. I surrender heart and soul, sacrificed to a higher goal. ~DepechMode~ |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Mark, Sorry its taken so long to reply, I've been earning my crust, thank you for your kind comments, they are much appreciated...big lmao at the smiley too. Regards Olias. J.M. Hello, back again like a bad penny , sorry for not replying sooner, there are so many new poets and the output of work is so high its impossible to keep up, Thank you for your wonderful support as always poet friend, you make every return a pleasant one. Take care Olias. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
enjoyed muchly. A pleasure to read. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I read this the first time you posted!!!!! Must have been too caught up in myself to respond then but I remember it. I loved the youth of it...wondered, not that it matters (just I think too much)...if that youth was still with you or simply a wonderfully expressed memory? Either way I walked through your words as they floated from your mind---and I was there. And it made me miss so many things, so many people. Thank you for your reply earlier.....and thanks for (by fate) having me read this again. It's all about love...no matter how it turns out. |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Mike, Thank you sir, for your kind reply. JLR We meet again, Thank you for your kind comments, this piece is very close to my heart, I'm young enough to remember my boyhood but old enough to forget some of the details lol. If that answers your question. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Regards to you both, Olias. |
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