Open Poetry #12 |
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Embracing the Darkness. . . |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA ![]() |
have I embraced The Darkness? have I embraced The Darkness as something wonderful something that hides yet shows all? have I embraced The Darkness as something treasured something waiting to be discovered? have I embraced The Darkness as something warm something that covers the harm? I have embraced The Darkness as all these things not as something to be feared but as something beautiful something that begs a second look and in the beauty of The Darkness I have found peace in the arms of The Darkness I have found comfort in the eyes of The Darkness I have found myself and in the heart of The Darkness I have found love. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, You are one lucky fellow and I realy enjoyed this poem. |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sven love, how utterly breathtakingly gorgeous, oh WOW. This is beauty this is really an amazinly wonderful beautiful piece from you. Utterly fabulous. Love it dear heart, I really do Another keeper Take care love Mushy ![]() Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You keep writing Keepers and I'm going to have to add another wing to my library... this is marvelous and I truly appreciate the concept and work behind it.... well done Sven... |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh my...you know how to touch my heart...and love to read this again, so a thread is going up. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Beckalini Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 151Yorkshire, England |
Nothing really to say other than that this is really beautiful....but I'm sure you already knew that! ![]() *Becky* |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
in the arms of The Darkness I have found comfort in the eyes of The Darkness I have found myself and in the heart of The Darkness I have found love _____________________________________________ SVEN, I very much enjoyed reading this poem... Some of my friends shy back from the darkness and yet I say those who embrace it find many a things and sometimes even love appears... I like this side of your writing and I thank you Friend for sharing this with us... ~*coco*~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
You should never fear the dark . . . for out of dark comes light . . . always . . . Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sven, So beautiful. Please don't stay in the darkness. Bring your heart out into the light for all to see... Much love, Elise |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I too (twice over) have found love in the darkness and I'm thankful for those loves each and every day... *hugs* Isis *The heart of education is the education of the heart...* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven~ My friend this is a most wonderful write, enjoyed the read and my fav and in the beauty of The Darkness I have found peace in the arms of The Darkness I have found comfort in the eyes of The Darkness I have found myself and in the heart of The Darkness I have found love. . . ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Elizabeth![]() ![]()
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Can't remember the exact phrase, but someone replied to a long-ago poem of mine with words to the effect of, 'Light needs dark too, one can't survive without the other.' Thought that fit here. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, without darkness, there is no light there's no break of day without the night. Loved this poem! and having been a student and lover of darkness I can relate to this one as well! write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful! Excellent! Wonderful! ohh....did I say.. BEAUTIFUL! ![]() Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful! Excellent! Wonderful! ohh....did I say.. BEAUTIFUL! ![]() Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sy, thank you. . . glad that you liked. . . Marsha love, thank you so much. . . I'm so glad that you loved it. . . Sunshine, thank you my friend. . . but I still don't think that it's going to be as big as my library of your writing. . . ![]() Charisma, that I have touched your heart says more than you mean. . . thank you my friend. . . Becky, I'm glad that you think so. . . it's always nice to hear. . . ![]() Coco, my poetfriend, I am now learning that there are many things to be found in The Darkness. . . where you thought there was nothing. . . ![]() LW, indeed, The Dark is a part of us all. . . and we should never fear it. . . thank you. . . ![]() Elise, The Darkness is not to be feared. . . it's a part of us. . . thank you my friend. . . Isis, I knew that you would understand. . . thank you my friend. . . ![]() Tracie, you too my friend have indeed grasped the meanings here. . . thank you for reading. . . Elizabeth. . . exactly. . . that thought does fit here. . . thank you. . . ![]() Kethry, indeed. . . I have recently become a student myself. . . just needed the right teacher. . . thank you. . . Temptress... you did!! twice!! thank you my friend. . . ![]() ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
....and in the heart of Darkness.... I have found Love Oh, Sven, this is finding a special place in my library! What beautiful words! ![]() Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A beautiful and inspirational poem Sven .. indeed, from the darkest dark, comes the brightest light. I really enjoyed this piece! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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