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Erase the Distance
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Erase the Distance |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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Erase the Distance Run your fingers through my hair, tangle yourself up in the length of me and throw your colors over my empty canvas create a me, that wasn't there before, you Bring me higher into the storm, allow our tears to rain down over the pictures of the past, erasing then ... draw your tongue over the shades of love and paint me, tomorrow Taste the salty sweet remnants of tender passion, lingering on ... long after make me come unglued at the sight of you take my breath and inhale it into your own lungs close your eyes and see the impression I left Place your hand to your chest and feel the place where I crawled inside and claimed it as my own Come ... erase the distance I need you more now than ever... I need us. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
i can relate...so badly. thanks. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
you don't sit back and let the question ask itself, do you?....well done! |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
I like this one,very good! AP |
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Pixydust Junior Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 36 |
WOW!  That's it ... I can't say another word ... I'm speachless! Pixydust |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Snow--Wonderful writing. Enjoyed this muchly. Poeminister "I drank at every vine/The last was like the first I came upon no wine/ So wonderful as the thirst" ~Millay |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Hi Babe! I love this...but you know that...wink! Robert Joseph ~ek~ |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
a [This message has been edited by A Whisper's Caress (edited 02-12-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Snow~ I just happen to love it ! Wonderfully expressive. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
JLR, thank you for your comment. Sunshine, ::smiles:: thank you! AP, I'm pleased you like this. thank you. Pixydust... you said a lot! thank you. Poeminister, thank you so much for your comment!! Marge... *vbs* I really appreciate your comment.. thank you! Robert, yes, I know.~eyn~ |
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