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SEA

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0 posted 2001-01-12 12:15 PM

Twilight came
much too soon
I wasn't prepared
for the power of the moon

Shining right into my soul
turning my tide
leaving me with no where to run
no where to hide

The memories flood~
running deep as the sea
~painfully sweet memories
of you and me

Almost, as if on cue
the radio plays a song from the past
and I'm forced to remember
you promised ours was a love to last

~SEA~

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-01-12 12:23 PM

Twilight came
much too soon
I wasn't prepared
for the power of the moon

Shining right into my soul
turning my tide
leaving me with no where to run
no where to hide
=====================

you KNOW I love this one dont ya...
yes..you know...
very cool Sea-girlie
love the mix of emotions and imagery of the ocean
well done me gator-girl

jm

No one ever told me ... I could get lost while standing still ...
and sorrow doesnt make a sound ... as it takes away all your will.

SEA

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2 posted 2001-01-12 12:27 PM

Thanks Janet

I still haven't gotten up to do my Weekend Wrap up (heehee) I'm stuck here in Passions.......I figure I have a few more minutes, then I'll be running for the rest of my day......LOL........oh yea, Meatloaf LOL!

-SEA

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-01-12 12:31 PM

This is wonderful....loving it....

Sven

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East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-01-12 01:10 PM

sometimes, I wish I didn't have to remember. . .

wonderful SEA. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Charisma

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lost in blue pages

5 posted 2001-01-12 02:24 PM

*sigh*.....yeah memories......they can be sweet and painful...
lovely piece my friend

((hugs))
Charisma

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2001-01-12 02:45 PM

"painfully sweet"...you have described those moments perfectly...James

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

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7 posted 2001-01-12 04:44 PM

Yes, sometimes it's impossible to hide even in the moonlight. Lovely thoughts, here SEA

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen

SEA

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8 posted 2001-01-12 05:13 PM

Sunshine~

always......thank you

Sven~ me too.......

thank you

Charisma~ definately

thank you

James~ nice to see you...thank you

Irish Rose~ I'm so glad you liked this

thank you

-SEA

Frankie
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since 2001-01-10

Posts 57

9 posted 2001-01-12 05:20 PM

Loved this one SEA - But remember, those memories that bring us pain can also bring us extreme happiness at other times....guess it depends on that given moment when you remember.

Frankie

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

10 posted 2001-01-12 05:24 PM

Circe love, Oh this is soooooooo great, uterly utterly wonderful. Now this is talent, this is beauty, and I love it, and you knew I would I know.
Wonderful love truly excellant
Take care love
Mushy

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

doreen peri
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Virginia

11 posted 2001-01-12 05:29 PM

*sigh*... painfully sweet.... excellent title and metaphor....

dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida

12 posted 2001-01-12 05:33 PM

very nicely written SEA..i like this one

hugs, g

"oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens

CocoBaci
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13 posted 2001-01-12 05:40 PM

hi SEA, this one goes into library to keep...
It's a great write sweetie and I thank you for providing me with this read...
*~coco~*

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

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Regina SK; Canada

14 posted 2001-01-12 05:47 PM

SEA--I like this muchly, beautiful imagery and flow in this peice...enjoyed the read, as always.

take care,
Poeminister

SEA

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15 posted 2001-01-12 07:14 PM

Frankie~ yes, definately

thanks

Mushy~ yes sweetie, thank you so much

Doreen~ thank you!

Dg~

thank you

Coco~ it's an honor to be in your library! Thank you

PM~ always, so nice to me

thank you

-SEA

Beckalini
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since 2001-01-02

Posts 151
Yorkshire, England

16 posted 2001-01-12 07:19 PM

A beautiful write SEA, but I expected nothing less. And don't the memories always catch us off guard when we can't hide? I hate that! *smiles*
~Becky~

Nate Dogg
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Georgia, Fulton

17 posted 2001-01-12 07:21 PM

Crystal-clear imagery in my head, Sea...a lovely write!

Nathan

Wilfred Yeats
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Wilmington, Delaware

18 posted 2001-01-12 07:34 PM

In brevity I find the best soul - (epic poems I frequently abandon) here is soul in abundance - You got to me.

Lone Wolf
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Lansing, MI USA

19 posted 2001-01-12 07:40 PM

SEA,

Perhaps my friend the time has come for new memories to replace the old broken ones. This was powerful and sad. I wish I couldn't relate, but unfortunately I can. Wishing you the best.

LW

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Paula Finn
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missouri

20 posted 2001-01-13 02:38 AM

Sea...yep memories can be powerful things...and its sad when the only ones we seem to remember are the ones that hurt us the most...but that helps us learn...and grow

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

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In the winds of Cherokee song

21 posted 2001-01-13 02:57 PM

This was more than merely lovely but of course whenever you pen from that heart of emotions you possess they always are. I truely am glad that I read this one of yours. Memories brought to their peak by circumstance and music are often very overwhelming and you portrayed that well here.

Kit McCallum

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22 posted 2001-01-13 02:59 PM

Ahhh those songs ... they get to me too SEA, amazing how many memories from the past are wrapped up with the music of the day. Wonderful poem!

Best wishes,
/Kit

jwesley
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Spring, Texas

23 posted 2001-01-13 03:04 PM

This then, was lovely. Encompassing all. Very well written, my friend. It echos in the mind even after the retinal image has gone.

jwesley

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