Open Poetry #12 |
Your Voice |
Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
I remember your voice as bitter as december wind icy cold and void of emotion whipping through me as my heart drops to the floor Of the many sides of you this will always be the one that scares me most To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
very cold indeed. . . it's always scary when we see a side of someone that surprises us. . . well done. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Very true. Thank you, Sven. You know I always try to save everyone from seeing me in my Psychotic Mental State. *grins!* To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Psychotic? I don't think so. Voices can send a lot of messages that having nothing to do with the words they speak. Well done. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
It is always a shock to our hearts when the sound of ones voice, especially the one you Love, is so cold. Nicely written. |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
kcsgrandma - Thank you! I was actually talking about pms in my comment to Sven. I swear I'm only psychotic 3 days a month. The rest of the month I'm completely sane. LOL! kitkat - Thank you! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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