Open Poetry #12 |
Long Distance Love |
Miss Abagail Mannering Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 136byron, il |
Long Distance Love (written July 13th 00) I was gone at camp, and had to leave my beloved for 3 weeks of hell. Distance makes some hearts grow fonder, while others are inclined to wander. One knows what the other thinks- true love floats, and false love sinks. Loving thoughts make true hearts swell Upon fond memories the mind does dwell. A longing look to a picture frame makes me ache to call your name. I'll come home to your charms, to snuggle up in your arms... to hear your laughter, feel your touch- and say, "I love you very much!" "Ya have to kiss a lot of frogs before you meet your prince... just watch out for all the pond scum!!!" |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* this truly expresses the feelings of love and being separated from it. It is good to know you were able to go home to it. Much love and hugs to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://www.voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I like your positive attitude in this poem it really makes the reader appreciate the other side of the story good work! ethome |
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Miss Abagail Mannering Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 136byron, il |
*blushes* thank you everyone. "Ya have to kiss a lot of frogs before you meet your prince... just watch out for all the pond scum!!!" |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
I enjoyed your treatment of this subject, and do like the conclusion of it. I like your signature line, too! To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Absence makes the heart grow fonder Enjoyed this one. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Miss Abagail, This is wonderful, tender and sweet, thank you for sharing. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
It does, well written ~Maria~ |
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Miss Abagail Mannering Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 136byron, il |
Thank you everyone.. "Ya have to kiss a lot of frogs before you meet your prince... just watch out for all the pond scum!!!" |
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