Open Poetry #12 |
Northern Light and Blazing Blizzard |
kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Northern Light I read your e-mail. Aurora borealis Reflected my smile. *********************** Blazing Blizzard Snow and cold outside Glowing fire in my heart Because you are there. |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
I enjoyed reading these. nicely done :-) -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
How very nice! Both are gems. Hugs, ME |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this one really shone, "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
like these, so much feeling in such short verse |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely haiku. Nicely done. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
Marilyn, you can put so much meaning into such a short space....subtlety and clarity combined! Lary |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I love the images that you use here. . . wonderful. . . -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
kitkat - Thank you. I couldn't help writing such a big smile. Mother Earth - Thank you. Hugs back. Kathleen - Thanks. I like your choice of words. jellybeans - That's the fun thing about these Japanese forms, trying to say a lot with a little. Thank you. Poeminster - Thank you. Lary - Not only are you a master poet, but a wonderful responder as well! Thank you. Sven - Thanks to a fellow northerner. We write what we know. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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