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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-02-06 03:12 PM

Ambient

I fear from you what not achieved
a whisper from a heart that grieved
yet, if I thought that feeling true
my heart alone, might, be with you
but then I remember who you are
we both wear a crimson scar
still shield my heart it is a must
hard letting go, and then to trust
afraid to grieve again, or grieve alone
a product of a past now shown
this holding back could be a sin
I'm so afraid to let you in
can this ruin be repaired
and is the secret to be shared
forgive me now because i cry
my life so painted with green sky
the guard is down, I may now be damned
for all I have to offer is who I am

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-02-06 05:57 PM

and that's all we can do helen. . . and hope for the best. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

2 posted 2001-02-06 06:09 PM

Excellent work, helen, I like this alot.
You paint the dilemma well . . .

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

3 posted 2001-02-06 11:26 PM

Helen have to say this is one of the best you've written. Wonderful expression of emotion.
Rich

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

4 posted 2001-02-06 11:28 PM

Forgot to save

[This message has been edited by spiked (edited 02-06-2001).]

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

5 posted 2001-02-06 11:57 PM

Wonderful writing, painted the mood perfectly , keep looking forward

Julie

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-02-07 09:35 AM

All you are is plenty or they don't deserve you!!!!

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis

ATelamon
Member

since 2001-02-06

Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up

7 posted 2001-02-07 11:36 AM

Ahh the dilemna
to dare to open
saying once more
knowing the risks

yet the call itself
will decide the fate
and tomorrow will be
no matter its colour

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