Open Poetry #12 |
A Telamon (Acrostic 1) |
ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
a telamon alone stands yearning eyes overlooks a dream upright strength rarest stone ever standing he alone now caryatids none home razed avanchaled debris broken temple pieces over run with ages vagaries he waits endures all standing [This message has been edited by ATelamon (edited 02-07-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A most interesting entrance into your new Home! Welcome! I hope you take time to look around, read, comment, and post more interesting pieces such as this! If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact a moderator. And check your e-mail for a special greeting! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 02-06-2001).] |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Very interesting, indeed. You paint quite a picture - welcome to Passions. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Welcome! Excellent entrance piece. Looking forward to more of your work. |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Welcome! I read this several times and really enjoyed it because I had to pause and reflect through it. I even had to search the dictionary once or twice. I do believe, though, that in the end I got it. Will look forward to reading more from you. To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
My thanks for the kind greetings and comments. |
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