Open Poetry #12 |
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Opened at last |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Did you look deep inside, Did you open the door, COme inside? Did your eyes finally open, Then realize, Where you were? Did it finally dawn on you? Did you envision from the start, Was there any compromise, In any given time? For one brief second, Don't you feel the least bit faint? Don't you hesitate, Feel somewhat emancipated? How does it feel, To finally realize, That the door you just opened, Leads to your heart. |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I love this one. . . it's always hardest to see when we've opened ourselves to. . .well, ourselves. . .LOL excellent. . . ![]() ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
Ah, that secret entrance! So many are afraid to open it, let alone enter... Really enjoyed this! Lary |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Sven your so right, the hardest thing sometimes is to open our own hearts, to often were worrying about the other person, not realizing it may be ourselves, Laryalee, the heart sometimes has like this real heavy door but once opened, It makes those emotions appear which need to if love ever is to shine. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RoseBud~ Don't know why but it brought to mind an old, old song line - 'I hear you knocking, but you can't come in.' Sometimes we are so busy worrying about how others are going to get in - we forget that we must first open the door. Nicely written. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
I think your so right Marge so often we forget our heart must be open to receive. I to remember that song. |
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