Open Poetry #12 |
Pillow Talk |
KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Tell me how you feel Take a walk on the wild side Yes! Express yourself! Whisper in my ear Bring smiles that beguile Baby.. tell me more Whisper how much you want me Ohhh… Now, show me what you mean Music to my ears Whisper me to paradise You won’t regret it…. © 2001 Koko (All rights reserved) Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Whoo Hoo! *taking a walk on the wild side* And I actually said "whoo hoo" after I read this! *G* I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Yes, how I love this one!!!!!!!!!!! I've often thought how wonderful it is that human beings can communicate, and how tragic that we don't more often!! Koko.....this is a grand write, and I thank you for the read!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Koko, Cute, enjoyed the read. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Whisper me to paradise. You won't regret it." I like your pillow talk..James |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
a big thanks to you all for commenting on this Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KoKo~ Oh, I like this immensely ! 'Whisper me to paradise' Indeed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is a little walk on the wild and I love it cause, I'm kind of like that too...anyways, this is a cute poem.....wonderful write! Nathan |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
KOKO, this is sweet I digged the beat I liked the expression and needless to mention I enjoyed the read... coco |
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