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Times Gate
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Times Gate |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Come walk with me Through times gate Lets leave the past behind Lets leave the past behind And make new memories All our own All our own Our own love songs Sung to the rising sun Sung to the rising sun As our passion soars Burning in the heat of our love Burning in the heat of our love The desire and want An ache between us An ache between us Just waiting to be eased With a kiss With a kiss That takes us Through times gate Come walk with me |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Here is to your kiss and your walk. I really enjoyed this creation of yours and I love it when you pen with such faith and vision of hope. |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
When thou walks through times gate and the past is laid upon it, an overcoat discarded, pocketed with memories, swinging to and fro, each morn to the old, bringing forth the new as the sun touches, heats up and allows the past to become impassioned with a new burn... then, each step takes thee to a kiss beyond time. Lady Ollyne "O, learn to read what silent love hath writ: To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
simply beautiful. i am speechless. and in tears for i had said this same speach before. *holds out his hand* thank you love ya paula I'm on the outside I'm looking in i can see through you see your true colours cuz inside your ugly ugly like me cuz i can see though you and se |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula love, this is as always beautiful, and it certainly looks far too dificult to write one of these. Utterly wonderful love it really is. (And Girly don't you dare think you can challenge me to do one of these. Kari had me working as....um ...siduously yesterday.  )Wonderful work as always Take care love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Paula~ Breathtakingly beautiful, I'm ready for another beautiful walk  ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I have to thank a dear friend for the inspiration forthis...you know who you are HUGS Mark...whats life without hope? And faith is easy when you have someone you trust to hold your hand along the walk. Lady Ollyne...thank you for the poetic reply it is lovely in and of itself Jesse...hugs friend...love ya too Marsha girl...LOL well consider yourself CHALLENGED...you can just work your as...siduosly a little harder LMAO...you are too cute girlie..LOVE YA Tracie...walk with me then sweet friend...you are always welcome in my heart...thank you |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Paula~ this is beautiful! I really enjoy this style of writing -SEA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Paula, this is wonderful...you knew I would like it.... |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is very lovely, Paula....I loved the way you corresponded the last line..that's very creative...by the way, may I borrow(ha, ha,just kidding)...anyways, I loved this...a brilliant write! Nathan |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautifully rendered Paula! Such a lovely flow to these lines ... a wonderful style with beautiful sentiments, nicely done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yes, I too, loved the what was said, and the way it was done...applause to you. jwesley |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Mm, Paula, this is a beauty. Saving to my library. I don't know the name of this style, but it was done very well, I know that much. And the words, of course, repeat the ones in my heart. Sandra |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely piece...enjoyed the read... Poeminister |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh Paula sweetie, this is absolutely stunning... I so much enjoyed this read and I thank you for sharing this with us... *~coco~* |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sea...thank you...I never did this before so Im not real sure just what it is LOL Sunshine...well I always hope you will Nathan...LOL sweet stuff you can borrow anytime...glad you liked it Sandra...what an honor to have you place this in your library...thats so very sweet of you...thank you Poeminister...thank you Coco...its always such a pleasure having you read my poems...thank you |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Great write, Paula! And, I think it's a great challenge! I really like this! sp I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Sensational! One of your best. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
SP...well take the challenge and write friend...thanks EagleOne...well it was INSPIRED!!LOL ya know? Thanks |
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