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Sister Moon Greets the Sun
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Sister Moon Greets the Sun |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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Dusk to dawn I wait Now to rest, the torch I offer to my brother sun. I his sister moon have cooled the night for him blazoned it with stars True light is now required not mere reflection of his grace the clouds await his welcome touch shine on brother sun < !signature--> Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. [This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 01-13-2001).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Great response to Sven's post. I knew it would be. Now on with the series. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is good stuff kid...perfect images Life's a game...but who says you have to follow the rules? |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Mark and Paula, Thanks! this was literally an unplanned response to Sven's brother sun. Although we'd talked about doing a joint series, I did not expect him to post so soon or so well and I certainly did not expect him to dob me in, in his prelude. be well Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Keth~ Beautiful write, you've done well  ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry love, Well if he hadn't (dobbed you in love, do keep up) I would have done. You know I love this one, and it is as always beautiful. It has such a perfect flow love. Excellant work, sending you back my love and loud cheers of Bravi Bravi Bravisimi. (I could have waved a flag too, but I haven't got one to hand, and I am not going hunting flags at this time of day  )Take care love Slushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ Ohhhhhhhh, I like it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I so enjoy opening up Passions [like a favorite, cherished book] and finding new surprises every day! Write on little one! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
shine on sister moon.... VERY COOL Keth ... VERY!!! keep em coming jm No one ever told me ... I could get lost while standing still ... and sorrow doesnt make a sound ... as it takes away all your will. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Surprise!! Great job Kethry. . . perfect response to mine. . . this is a great idea that you had. . . More on the way!! ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh my....wonderful done kethry...love these serie. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks everyone for reading both Sven's and yo paired poems. A true collaboration is coming, promise even if I have to write it all myself.*laughs* Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Beautiful Kethry, I love the way you did this one. *s* Peace. On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. Donna Smith |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Gentle Spirit, thanks Kethry. Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Wonderfully done...enjoyed the read. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Did good!! Yep, yep, yep! jwesley |
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