Open Poetry #12 |
Passions Eclipse{Tanka} |
KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
passionate eclipse sun wrapped around glowing moon morning ambrosia emotional concerto as we two become as one Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very descriptive and passionate. Great writing and use of metaphors. |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
thanks Mark. I am very appreciative of your comments. Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Very good writing. I loved the feel of passion. Love and light, Richard |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Fabulous, truly beautiful loved the graphic as well Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
appreciative and thankful for your time to read and comment on this tanka Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Yup! I think you've got it! Well done... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow! Great imagery and use of metaphor, I really feel the passion throughout especially into the last line - well penned! Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is so pretty......very silky... -SEA |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Fantastic, lovely, powerful, and a keeper for sure! May I? May I share with a poet loving friend? Gosh I hope, if you say it's okay that the pic will copy, too. They won't always, for me. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
yes.....yessssssss........wonderful eclipse here....love it. ((Hugs)) Charisma |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This...is wonderful! |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Thanks to all for your overwhelming responses to this..wow I appreciate it. VAS: Yes please feel free to share the poem and the jpg.photo (I got it at www.webshots.com...where most of my photos come from) http://wsphotofews.excite.com/001/60/Q3/d2/sY49695.jpg smiles passin on one's poem is a great compliment to a writer. Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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