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Open Poetry #12

DayBreak

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2001-02-05 10:44 AM

Day

B

R

E

A

K

Virginia Salter

The sun is bursting past the clouds

as wind's blown them away.

The world's no longer in a shroud

and I'm going out to play!
© February 5, 2001

Note: the letters of the break in the title were supposed to each get larger.

[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 02-05-2001).]

USBZoso
Junior Member

since 2001-02-05

Posts 20

1 posted 2001-02-05 10:47 AM

hey this is nice, day is smaller then BREAK
hahahaha

Jill
Member

since 2001-02-02

Posts 62
Louisiana

2 posted 2001-02-05 10:53 AM

You Go Girl.....Play some for me too!!!!!

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

3 posted 2001-02-05 11:14 AM

A breath of fresh air! Simple beauty is represented here. Nice.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 2001-02-05 08:46 PM

Hey Virginia... I tried to get this to do what you wanted... I made some progress - now if only I could figure out how to get it all on one line.... It's a neat poem... If you don't like my meddling (Actually, I was playing)... We can certainly put it back as it was... or some semblence there of...

I LOVE day break... it's the best time of day..