Open Poetry #12 |
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Oh Brother! |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I'm so tired I should sleep But something's keeping me awake The creaking floorboards no longer creak There's only so much quiet I can take Take a moment, just relax Shut my eyes, green and blue balls Send out a rather important fax Count the flies on the wall Chilly kitchen lilnolium floor Coffee left over from mother Hold my chin in my hands, I'm bored Think about waking up tomorrow morning Oh brother! We see them come. We see them go. Some are fast. And some are slow. Some are high. Some are low. Not one of them is like another. Don't ask us |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
that pretty well sums it up sometimes... oh brother... *smile* nicely done, enjoyed. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
a most unusual title, I too, enjoyed. "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
so why go to sleep then??? ![]() great one Joy. . . ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Joy, nice to see you here! Don't you just hate it when you know you need to sleep and your mind won't turn off? Hope it's sweet dreams next time. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
*Grins* This sounds alot like me talking to myself! Loved it! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Elizabeth![]() ![]()
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I know how this goes! ![]() |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
Apprehending tomorrow as toil slave to sunrise or the clock which whirls this modern world to existence To be bothered to greet the day all have said dawn and dawn again |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Hi. Glad you all liked this. Just a quicky. And I was tired the next morning if you were wondering. ![]() Joy Our doubts are traitors, And make us loose the good we oft might win By fearing to attempt. ~Shakespeare |
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